<?xml version='1.0' encoding='UTF-8'?><?xml-stylesheet href="http://www.blogger.com/styles/atom.css" type="text/css"?><feed xmlns='http://www.w3.org/2005/Atom' xmlns:openSearch='http://a9.com/-/spec/opensearchrss/1.0/' xmlns:georss='http://www.georss.org/georss' xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' xmlns:thr='http://purl.org/syndication/thread/1.0'><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3634709129539905758</id><updated>2011-07-30T12:20:51.551-04:00</updated><category term='lectures'/><category term='reading'/><category term='homework'/><category term='revision'/><category term='artists news'/><category term='video art'/><category term='essay3'/><category term='schedule'/><category term='books'/><category term='video'/><category term='citation'/><category term='events'/><category term='artists'/><category term='projects'/><category term='photos'/><category term='links'/><category term='blog'/><category term='war'/><category term='assignments'/><category term='library'/><category term='announcements'/><title type='text'>CAS 100 - Salt Stories</title><subtitle type='html'></subtitle><link rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#feed' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/feeds/posts/default'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default?max-results=100'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/'/><link rel='hub' href='http://pubsubhubbub.appspot.com/'/><author><name>Fereshteh</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><generator version='7.00' uri='http://www.blogger.com'>Blogger</generator><openSearch:totalResults>59</openSearch:totalResults><openSearch:startIndex>1</openSearch:startIndex><openSearch:itemsPerPage>100</openSearch:itemsPerPage><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3634709129539905758.post-5432463527419416357</id><published>2008-06-18T12:46:00.000-04:00</published><updated>2008-06-18T12:47:31.834-04:00</updated><title type='text'>Class contribution to SUPERFUND 265</title><content type='html'>http://transition.turbulence.org/Works/superfund/week11.html&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3634709129539905758-5432463527419416357?l=salt-marsh.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/feeds/5432463527419416357/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=3634709129539905758&amp;postID=5432463527419416357' title='41 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/5432463527419416357'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/5432463527419416357'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/2008/06/class-contribution-to-superfund-265.html' title='Class contribution to SUPERFUND 265'/><author><name>Fereshteh</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>41</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3634709129539905758.post-5692333280731943655</id><published>2007-12-07T11:21:00.000-05:00</published><updated>2008-12-09T20:45:17.657-05:00</updated><title type='text'>final art example of the semester</title><content type='html'>&lt;a onblur="try {parent.deselectBloggerImageGracefully();} catch(e) {}" href="http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_K8v57lA4UDE/R1lzWNRdbEI/AAAAAAAAAD8/Eyq0M_QZ5ng/s1600-h/droppedImage_5.jpg"&gt;&lt;img style="margin: 0pt 10px 10px 0pt; 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Each member will post an IDENTICAL, &lt;i&gt;group-authored&lt;/i&gt; document. This means you have to find a time to meet over the weekend. This should be a short essay that serves as a &lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;script &lt;/span&gt;for the presentation you will give in class. It will be the text that you read to the class, including notes about when and where you will present audio visual information. Make sure to indicate who will be presenting each section, keeping in mind that each group member needs to hold equal responsibility for the project. Your proposal should include information from the creative brief, but it will provide more &lt;span style="font-style: italic;"&gt;elaborate, complex, and refined&lt;/span&gt; answers. &lt;/li&gt;&lt;/ol&gt;&lt;b&gt;Monday 3 December&lt;/b&gt;&lt;br /&gt;NO CLASS - WORK DAY! Take this opportunity to meet with your group members to prepare your presentations for Wednesday.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;b&gt;Wednesday 5 December&lt;/b&gt;&lt;br /&gt;HW: Prepare a &lt;u&gt;5-min&lt;/u&gt; excerpt from your presentation of &lt;u&gt;images&lt;/u&gt; and other information about your project for the class to give you feedback. This will be graded. ALSO: You will turn in the handout questions from last Friday.&lt;br /&gt;in-class: in-process critiques of your project presentations&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;b&gt;Friday 7 December: last day of classes!&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/b&gt;HW: Bring &lt;span style="font-weight: bold; color: rgb(51, 102, 255);"&gt;WRITING PORTFOLIO&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 153);"&gt;: &lt;span style="font-style: italic;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;1- &lt;span style="color: rgb(102, 0, 0);"&gt;Hard copies (ie physical/paper copies) &lt;/span&gt;of essay 1 &amp;amp; 2, BOTH VERSIONS along with all associated ROUGH DRAFTS and other materials that were in your submission packets.&lt;br /&gt;2- &lt;span style="color: rgb(102, 0, 0);"&gt;Digital copies of essay 1, 2, 3!&lt;/span&gt; This can be on a flash drive, CD-R, or emailed to me by the start of class.&lt;br /&gt;Do not give me &lt;span style="font-size:180%;"&gt;.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="font-size:180%;"&gt;docx &lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="font-style: italic;"&gt;files, I will not be able to open them. They should be &lt;span style="font-size:180%;"&gt;&lt;span style="color: rgb(0, 153, 0);"&gt;.doc&lt;/span&gt; &lt;/span&gt;or&lt;span style="font-size:180%;"&gt; &lt;span style="color: rgb(0, 153, 0);"&gt;.txt &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;or &lt;span style="font-size:180%;"&gt;&lt;span style="color: rgb(0, 153, 0);"&gt;.rtf&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;These materials are being collected to evaluate the CAS 100 program. Everything will be&lt;br /&gt;returned to you, along with essay 3, on our presentation days next week.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span&gt;in-class: group work day and group meetings with FT&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;* Group assessment from PDF - &lt;a href="http://fereshteh.net/salty/group_assessment.pdf"&gt;LINK&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;We will do this before the presentations. FHT will bring snacks.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="color: rgb(204, 0, 0);font-size:180%;" &gt;Wednesday 12 December 7:15-9:15 PM PRESENTATIONS for 9:30 section &lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="color: rgb(204, 0, 0);font-size:180%;" &gt;Thursday 13 December 2:45-4:45 PM PRESENTATIONS for 11:40 section &lt;/span&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3634709129539905758-5352214595853121472?l=salt-marsh.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/feeds/5352214595853121472/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=3634709129539905758&amp;postID=5352214595853121472' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/5352214595853121472'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/5352214595853121472'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/2007/11/week-15-last-week-of-classes.html' title='week 15: last week of classes'/><author><name>Fereshteh</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3634709129539905758.post-8713991965776838766</id><published>2007-11-28T12:37:00.000-05:00</published><updated>2008-12-09T20:45:18.592-05:00</updated><title type='text'>examples from your classmates</title><content type='html'>&lt;a href="http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_K8v57lA4UDE/R02n8A_pbSI/AAAAAAAAADI/kGiVtV3h1sI/s1600-h/OL+diagram.jpg"&gt;&lt;img id="BLOGGER_PHOTO_ID_5137947399400549666" style="margin: 0px 10px 10px 0px; float: left;" alt="" src="http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_K8v57lA4UDE/R02n8A_pbSI/AAAAAAAAADI/kGiVtV3h1sI/s400/OL+diagram.jpg" border="0" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;a onblur="try {parent.deselectBloggerImageGracefully();} catch(e) {}" href="http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_K8v57lA4UDE/R1AxWA_pbVI/AAAAAAAAADg/WGNwkZmwwlk/s1600-R/+lake_timeline.jpg"&gt;&lt;img style="margin: 0pt 10px 10px 0pt; float: left; cursor: pointer;" src="http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_K8v57lA4UDE/R1AxWA_pbVI/AAAAAAAAADg/Yhuiu0cHNdw/s400/+lake_timeline.jpg" alt="" id="BLOGGER_PHOTO_ID_5138661429123575122" border="0" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;CLICK ON IMAGE TO ENLARGE.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;The computer graphic of the lake is an eye-catching data visualization from Rachael, Matt, and Justin. It works best for getting information across in a simple, engaging manner, and could be supplemented by another more traditional chart showing more concrete statistics and "hard facts".&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;The hand-made timeline  from Courtney, Tim, and Amy works with use of color and simple drawings.&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3634709129539905758-8713991965776838766?l=salt-marsh.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/feeds/8713991965776838766/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=3634709129539905758&amp;postID=8713991965776838766' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/8713991965776838766'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/8713991965776838766'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/2007/11/examples-from-your-classmates.html' title='examples from your classmates'/><author><name>Fereshteh</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><media:thumbnail xmlns:media='http://search.yahoo.com/mrss/' url='http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_K8v57lA4UDE/R02n8A_pbSI/AAAAAAAAADI/kGiVtV3h1sI/s72-c/OL+diagram.jpg' height='72' width='72'/><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3634709129539905758.post-5604974344757480066</id><published>2007-11-28T09:10:00.000-05:00</published><updated>2007-11-28T09:20:06.782-05:00</updated><title type='text'>Earthworks</title><content type='html'>&lt;a href="http://www.earthworks.org/links.html"&gt;http://www.earthworks.org/links.html&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Nancy Holt, The Sun Tunnels&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.npr.org/templates/story/story.php?storyId=5500934"&gt;http://www.npr.org/templates/story/story.php?storyId=5500934&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.clui.org/clui_4_1/ludb/sites/UT3126.html"&gt;http://www.clui.org/clui_4_1/ludb/sites/UT3126.html&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Walter De Maria, The Lightening Field&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.lightningfield.org/"&gt;http://www.lightningfield.org/&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;James Turrell, Roden Crater&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.pbs.org/art21/artists/turrell/clip1.html"&gt;http://www.pbs.org/art21/artists/turrell/clip1.html&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.npr.org/programs/morning/features/2001/feb/010208.turrell.html"&gt;http://www.npr.org/programs/morning/features/2001/feb/010208.turrell.html&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Robert Smithson, Spiral Jetty&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.npr.org/templates/story/story.php?storyId=4464074"&gt;http://www.npr.org/templates/story/story.php?storyId=4464074&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.robertsmithson.com/"&gt;http://www.robertsmithson.com/&lt;/a&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3634709129539905758-5604974344757480066?l=salt-marsh.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/feeds/5604974344757480066/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=3634709129539905758&amp;postID=5604974344757480066' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/5604974344757480066'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/5604974344757480066'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/2007/11/earthworks.html' title='Earthworks'/><author><name>Fereshteh</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3634709129539905758.post-4521435390553528601</id><published>2007-11-26T12:02:00.000-05:00</published><updated>2007-11-26T12:11:59.655-05:00</updated><title type='text'>helpful links for WED HW</title><content type='html'>Be creative with your data! It's OK to try unusual methods that you might not normally see in statistics or science texts. See the links below for ideas:&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.visual-literacy.org/periodic_table/periodic_table.html"&gt;http://www.visual-literacy.org/periodic_table/periodic_table.html&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;a thorough collection of examples of different kinds of charts, tables, and other data visualization&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.neoformix.com/"&gt;http://www.neoformix.com/&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;you can use this person's software apps to make your graphic!&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a href="http://infosthetics.com/"&gt;http://infosthetics.com/&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;a blog about data visualization&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.maxwell.syr.edu/geo/community_geography/index.html"&gt;http://www.maxwell.syr.edu/geo/community_geography/index.html&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;SU Community Geography site. We looked at a bus shelter map in class.&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3634709129539905758-4521435390553528601?l=salt-marsh.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/feeds/4521435390553528601/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=3634709129539905758&amp;postID=4521435390553528601' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/4521435390553528601'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/4521435390553528601'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/2007/11/helpful-links-for-wed-hw.html' title='helpful links for WED HW'/><author><name>Fereshteh</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3634709129539905758.post-1124078443240426254</id><published>2007-11-16T08:56:00.001-05:00</published><updated>2007-11-16T08:56:45.547-05:00</updated><title type='text'>final project info</title><content type='html'>&lt;a href="http://docs.google.com/View?docid=d32wwqt_23dz6q94"&gt;http://docs.google.com/View?docid=d32wwqt_23dz6q94&lt;/a&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3634709129539905758-1124078443240426254?l=salt-marsh.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/feeds/1124078443240426254/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=3634709129539905758&amp;postID=1124078443240426254' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/1124078443240426254'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/1124078443240426254'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/2007/11/final-project-outline.html' title='final project info'/><author><name>Fereshteh</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3634709129539905758.post-1413430201122521570</id><published>2007-11-14T15:31:00.000-05:00</published><updated>2007-11-28T22:28:22.228-05:00</updated><title type='text'>week 13-14: SF365, thanks, visuals</title><content type='html'>&lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;homework for Monday 19 November:&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Work on material for SF365, which will feature Onondaga Lake on Saturday 17 November. You will need to find a time to meet with your groups to do the following:&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold; color: rgb(0, 153, 0);"&gt;HW 1: &lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;&lt;span style="color: rgb(0, 153, 0);"&gt;required for all groups by the beginning of class Monday&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Only one person from your group should do this, so there isn't repetition. Make captions!&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;Post images from Onondaga Lake to the SF365 site. Each group should be posting 3 images. Only one person from your group should do this, so there isn't repetition.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a href="http://transition.turbulence.org/Works/superfund/upload.php" target="_blank"&gt;http://transition.turbulence&lt;wbr&gt;.org/Works/superfund/upload.php&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;ONONDAGA LAKE ID is NYD986913580&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold; color: rgb(0, 153, 0);"&gt;HW 2: extra credit &lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;&lt;span style="color: rgb(0, 153, 0);"&gt;by the beginning of class Monday&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Only one of your group members needs to post the newsletter to &lt;span style="font-style: italic;"&gt;their&lt;/span&gt; blog. Include all the authors' names and works cited list.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;Brooke Singer of &lt;a href="http://www.superfund365.org/"&gt;Superfund 365&lt;/a&gt; writes: &lt;span style="font-style: italic;"&gt;I would like to use my weekly SF365 email on this Onondaga site. The email blast goes out to over 100 people including some EPA and Clinton folks. I think it would be great to have it authored by students. The past few weeks I have both used the email blast to describe the place and history of sites as well as conduct interviews or cover press events. &lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="font-style: italic;"&gt;Here are some examples of past email reports sent to the mailing list:&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a href="http://transition.turbulence.org/Works/superfund/week8.html" target="_blank"&gt;http://transition.turbulence&lt;wbr&gt;.org/Works/superfund/week8.html&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a href="http://transition.turbulence.org/Works/superfund/week5.html" target="_blank"&gt;http://transition.turbulence&lt;wbr&gt;.org/Works/superfund/week5.html&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a href="http://transition.turbulence.org/Works/superfund/week7.html" target="_blank"&gt;http://transition.turbulence&lt;wbr&gt;.org/Works/superfund/week7.html&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Each group will compile information from their essays, editing together the best excerpts to make the finished product.  Please check the links to get a sense of the previous reports, and keep in mind the mission and perspective of the organization for whom you are writing. If you haven't checked out the SF365 site, you should do that and discuss with your group. Here is an excerpt that will give you a sense of their point of view:&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-style: italic;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-style: italic;"&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;Without a robust trust fund, Superfund not only translates into a burden for taxpayers but is weakened politically. The program today is more like a Band-Aid than a remedy. The EPA, without financial or political power, is hard pressed to take care of the worst cases of contamination that threaten human health and the environment across the U.S.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I will ask Brooke to choose the best report from each class. The members of this group will receive an extra 6 points on the CONTENT score for essay 2. Everyone who submits will get 3 extra points.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;b&gt;Monday 19 November: in-class work on final project - CHOOSE SITE &lt;/b&gt;&lt;b&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/b&gt;in-class: 1-Choose the site with your group. 2-Brainstorm with your group about the project to create a list of issues or topics the project might address, as well as forms it might take.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;b&gt;THANKSGIVING HOLIDAY&lt;/b&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;b&gt;Monday 26 November&lt;/b&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;HW: read KWON &lt;i&gt;Chapter 3: Sitings of Public Art: Integration Versus Intervention&lt;/i&gt; and contemplate possibilities for the group project&lt;br /&gt;in-class: quiz on Kwon Chapter 3 and work day on the project. DO NOT MISS CLASS. This quiz cannot be rescheduled for those who are absent.&lt;br /&gt;Your group will narrow down topics for the project. Each group must choose a different "inspiration" project from other groups in the class.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;b&gt;Wednesday 28 November&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/b&gt;HW: Create a group-authored VISUAL representation about some information that relates to your project. (Onondaga Lake Park OR Armory Square). See the Superfund 365 site for an example of how an artist has used data visualization (graphs, charts, maps) to present information. For example, if your project is about the lack of public phones in Armory Square, then use the map to indicate the location of existing public phones. If your project is about the the history and future of recreation at Onondaga Lake Park, make a timeline of events or mark all the spots that used to be swimming access points.&lt;br /&gt;in-class: final screening&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;b&gt;Friday 30 November&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/b&gt;HW: Each person in your group should bring printed copies of an INDIVIDUAL creative brief for their group mates and POST it to the blog.&lt;br /&gt;Don't work on this together. You will share your ideas together in class.&lt;br /&gt;The creative brief will provide short answers to the following questions:&lt;br /&gt;&lt;ol&gt;&lt;li&gt;     What is the project about?   &lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;     Describe what FORM the project will take.   &lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;     Why do you want to work in the location you have chosen?   &lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;     What is the history of the site?   &lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;     Why is this site particularly appropriate for the project?   &lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;     Is this project an integration or an intervention, and why?&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;     Will you get permission to work in the site?   &lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;     How does the piece disrupt OR fit in with the surroundings?   &lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;     Name at least one artist project that we have looked at this semester that     inspired your project and explain why your project is related.   &lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;     What are the goals &amp;amp; objectives of the project?   &lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;     How will you measure success for your project?   &lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;     Profile the target audience. Who are they? What do they care about? What are     their expected reactions?   &lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;     How do you want your audience to interact with your project?   &lt;/li&gt;&lt;/ol&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3634709129539905758-1413430201122521570?l=salt-marsh.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/feeds/1413430201122521570/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=3634709129539905758&amp;postID=1413430201122521570' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/1413430201122521570'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/1413430201122521570'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/2007/11/week-13-14-sf365-mapping.html' title='week 13-14: SF365, thanks, visuals'/><author><name>Fereshteh</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3634709129539905758.post-8788203819345174445</id><published>2007-11-12T20:11:00.000-05:00</published><updated>2007-11-12T20:14:29.224-05:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='events'/><title type='text'>Urban Video Project</title><content type='html'>&lt;span style="font-weight: bold;font-size:130%;" &gt;&lt;span style="color: rgb(102, 102, 0);"&gt;Blake, Christopher, and Colin from Avalanche Collective&lt;br /&gt;have an event this Thursday!&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;The Urban Video Project (UVP) will present "Perte de Signal," its sixth volume of outdoor multimedia projections, on &lt;b&gt;Thursday, Nov. 15, from 6–9 p.m. at 444 E. Genesee St.&lt;/b&gt; (across from the Fayette Firefighter's Memorial Park). The projections will take place regardless of weather conditions.The screening is part of the fall season of UVP, which features international artists and coincides with the fall evenings of Th3: A City-Wide Art Open, which is held on the third Thursday of each month.&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3634709129539905758-8788203819345174445?l=salt-marsh.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/feeds/8788203819345174445/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=3634709129539905758&amp;postID=8788203819345174445' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/8788203819345174445'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/8788203819345174445'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/2007/11/urban-video-project.html' title='Urban Video Project'/><author><name>Fereshteh</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3634709129539905758.post-6740502700399186644</id><published>2007-11-09T18:31:00.000-05:00</published><updated>2007-11-10T10:39:28.285-05:00</updated><title type='text'>ESSAY 3 : GRADING RUBRIC</title><content type='html'>BIG QUESTION I will be asking when I look at your papers:&lt;br /&gt;WHAT SIGNIFICANT CHANGES HAVE YOU MADE SINCE THE FRIDAY DRAFT?&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Grading Rubric:&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a href="http://docs.google.com/Doc?id=d32wwqt_21d3cb2r"&gt;&lt;span style="text-decoration: underline;"&gt;http://docs.google.com/Doc?id=d32wwqt_21d3cb2r&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Reminder about how to format your paper here:&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a href="http://docs.google.com/Doc?docid=d32wwqt_20hts4vd&amp;amp;hl=en"&gt;http://docs.google.com/Doc?docid=d32wwqt_20hts4vd&amp;amp;hl=en&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Please note: I am asking you to get a revision from someone outside of our class. This can be your dorm mate, your friend, a stranger in the coffee shop. If your family is in town this weekend, get them to read your paper. Your editor will need to WRITE DOWN their questions and comments on the paper.&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3634709129539905758-6740502700399186644?l=salt-marsh.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/feeds/6740502700399186644/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=3634709129539905758&amp;postID=6740502700399186644' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/6740502700399186644'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/6740502700399186644'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/2007/11/essay-3-grading-rubric.html' title='ESSAY 3 : GRADING RUBRIC'/><author><name>Fereshteh</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3634709129539905758.post-6497058183771745673</id><published>2007-11-09T17:13:00.000-05:00</published><updated>2007-11-12T11:05:36.349-05:00</updated><title type='text'>week 12: final project intro, Tucker, Walker PDF</title><content type='html'>Monday 12 November&lt;br /&gt;HW: paper due in Tolley 301 by 4pm SHARP&lt;br /&gt;in-class: screening&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Wednesday 14 November&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.miscprojects.com/danieltucker/"&gt;Daniel Tucker&lt;/a&gt; of &lt;a href="http://www.areachicago.org/"&gt;AREA Chicago&lt;/a&gt; will speak to our class about his work.&lt;br /&gt;HW: Browse Daniel's website. Read &lt;a href="http://www.areachicago.org/p/issues/issue-1/inheriting-grid-1/"&gt;"Inheriting the Grid #1"&lt;/a&gt; on how Daniel decided to start the magazine AREA. Write ONE comment and ONE question on a separate piece of paper with your name. I will collect these at the beginning of class for Daniel to address after his talk.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Friday 16 November&lt;br /&gt;HW: Read &lt;a href="http://media.walkerart.org/pdf/walker_4c_map.pdf"&gt;http://media.walkerart.org/pdf/walker_4c_map.pdf&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Think about the projects we have seen and heard about in our class. Designate a project for each of the major categories outlined by the map: convenor, container, connector, catalyst.&lt;br /&gt;in-class: first group work session for the final project&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3634709129539905758-6497058183771745673?l=salt-marsh.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/feeds/6497058183771745673/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=3634709129539905758&amp;postID=6497058183771745673' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/6497058183771745673'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/6497058183771745673'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/2007/11/week-12-final-project-intro-tucker.html' title='week 12: final project intro, Tucker, Walker PDF'/><author><name>Fereshteh</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3634709129539905758.post-5460470945691257129</id><published>2007-11-09T10:40:00.001-05:00</published><updated>2007-11-09T10:45:19.627-05:00</updated><title type='text'>RED ALERT</title><content type='html'>Do not discard the Ononondaga Lake essay packet. You will need to turn it in again at the end of the semester.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Submission check list for essay 3 and next week's schedule will be posted later today.&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3634709129539905758-5460470945691257129?l=salt-marsh.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/feeds/5460470945691257129/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=3634709129539905758&amp;postID=5460470945691257129' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/5460470945691257129'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/5460470945691257129'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/2007/11/red-alert.html' title='RED ALERT'/><author><name>Fereshteh</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3634709129539905758.post-3313002851952932361</id><published>2007-11-09T08:55:00.000-05:00</published><updated>2007-11-14T14:36:04.422-05:00</updated><title type='text'>writing exercises</title><content type='html'>&lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;ABSTRACT ASSERTIONS -&gt; CONCRETE DETAILS&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;Re-write these sentences so that they include more concrete and detailed language.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;* It was a great party; everybody had fun.&lt;br /&gt;* The film was very interesting.&lt;br /&gt;* Social security is not an entitlement.&lt;br /&gt;* He became extraordinarily angry.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;WRITING A MORE COMPLEX THESIS&lt;br /&gt;Notice how by the final version of this thesis, it becomes clear that the idea is primarily about the men's roles in film, as compared to the women's roles.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;DRAFT:&lt;br /&gt;Women in contemprorary films are represented as being more sensitive than men.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;REVISIONS:&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;Although&lt;/span&gt; women cry more readily in contemporary films, the men, by not crying, seem to win the audience's favor.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;The complications that fuel the plots in today's romantic comedies arise because women and men express their sensitivity so differently; the resolutions, &lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;however&lt;/span&gt;, rarely require men to capitulate.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;A spate of recent films has witnessed the emergence of a new "womanly" man as hero, and not surprisingly, his tender qualities seem to be the reason he attracts the female love interest.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;QUALIFYING OVERSTATED CLAIMS&lt;br /&gt;Re-write these thesis statements:&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;* Welfare encourages recipients not to work.&lt;br /&gt;* Herbal remedies are better than pharmaceutical ones.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;STYLE&lt;br /&gt;What is the difference between these 2 sentences?&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;DRAFT: The history of Indochina is marked by colonial exploitation as well as international cooperation.&lt;br /&gt;REVISION: The history of Indochina, although marked by colonial exploitation, testifies to the possibilities of international cooperation.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;DRAFT: The president's attitude towards military spending is ambiguous.&lt;br /&gt;REVISION: The president's attitude toward military spending is ambivalent.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-size:85%;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-style: italic;"&gt;These examples are from &lt;/span&gt;Writing Analytically&lt;span style="font-style: italic;"&gt; &lt;/span&gt;by &lt;span style="font-style: italic;"&gt;Rossenwasser &amp;amp; Stephen&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3634709129539905758-3313002851952932361?l=salt-marsh.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/feeds/3313002851952932361/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=3634709129539905758&amp;postID=3313002851952932361' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/3313002851952932361'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/3313002851952932361'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/2007/11/writing-exercises.html' title='writing exercises'/><author><name>Fereshteh</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3634709129539905758.post-7229036564788743168</id><published>2007-11-07T17:44:00.000-05:00</published><updated>2007-11-08T10:25:45.081-05:00</updated><title type='text'>Winning Writing</title><content type='html'>Today in class we looked at a good example of &lt;span style="color: rgb(102, 204, 204);"&gt;STRATEGY 6: attending to the language of your sources&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="color: rgb(102, 204, 204);"&gt;,&lt;/span&gt; and &lt;span style="color: rgb(102, 204, 204);"&gt;detailed description of a project&lt;/span&gt;. Here are other examples of strong passages from your classmates in different categories:&lt;span style="font-style: italic;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;DETAILED DESCRIPTION OF THE PIECE&lt;br /&gt;Don't forget to integrate analysis with this. Ask yourself: what does this DO for the piece, what are the IMPLICATIONS? See bold below.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="font-style: italic;font-size:85%;" &gt;Soon, slow tinkling music slows the action as Kashmere zooms in on the one violent act that unites them all, the slashing of Valery's ankle. The scene freezes, the tinkling music continues, the picture blurs and Kashmere's narrative with the many questions continues. In his narrative, Brett Kashmere explains his own childhood history as the tinkling bells music plays. &lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;The tinkling bells make the atmosphere seem mysterious and dark. It shocks viewers and promotes more questions from the mysterious feelings it evokes, while further enhancing the negative thoughts concerning the hockey violence in the film.&lt;/span&gt;  &lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="font-size:85%;"&gt;JASON WANG&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;STRATEGY 3: PUT YOUR SOURCES IN CONVERSATION WITH ONE ANOTHER&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="font-style: italic;font-size:85%;" &gt;In a work titled Code 33 police and young people of color came together in order to try and increase understanding between the two, in a relationship that is often marked by violence and misunderstandings due to pre-existing stereotypes (Kester 183). The project brought the two groups together in a series of extended conversations so that the police and youths might be more understanding of each other. In this sense Deller’s project has much of the same intentions as the work in California. Although the original intention of Deller was simply to re-create this historical event in order to present a fair side of the story, the end result became much more. By taking part in the reenactment and working side by side the mine workers and police officers were able to discuss and put to rest any lasting feelings of negativity that might have remained from the conflict. &lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="font-size:85%;"&gt;MIKE LEFKO&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;STRATEGY 4: FIND YOUR OWN ROLE IN THE CONVERSATION. In this short passage, the student author brings her knowledge of pop culture into the essay:&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="font-style: italic;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-size:85%;"&gt;funk serves as the “beacon of youth culture” for the black community, just as Madonna or Molly Ringwald are iconic to white popular culture (Tillotson 1).&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="font-size:85%;"&gt;and later...&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="font-style: italic;font-size:85%;" &gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="font-style: italic;font-size:85%;" &gt;just as funk music sings about controversial topics that appear “sexually threatening” and “culturally intrusive”, Rap music today speaks of violence, drug abuse and female objectification&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="font-size:85%;"&gt; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="font-style: italic;font-size:85%;" &gt;(Piper 133)&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="font-size:85%;"&gt;.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="font-size:85%;"&gt; LAUREN JOFFE&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;INTRODUCE THE READER TO THE LARGER CONCEPTS&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="font-style: italic;font-size:85%;" &gt;Artists are no longer historians but philosophers as well. They attempt to understand the problems of society and solve them through public forms of artwork, which has completely altered the spectrum and purpose of art. In many cases, the audience actually participates in the formation of the art, becoming subjects instead of just viewers (Kwon 117). &lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="font-size:85%;"&gt;BLAIR DUDIK&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="font-style: italic;font-size:85%;" &gt;...Throughout the twentieth century many artists are moving away from that general misconception with new genres of art emerging throughout the century, such as avant-garde, “dialogic”, public and participatory art. These new genres of art have been focusing mainly on the conversation, participation or ideas from the general public to create the definition for the pieces of work. What clearly has arrived is that art is considered in a much wider array of forms then we previously believed.  &lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="font-size:85%;"&gt;TIM KIANKA&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;STRATEGY 6: ATTEND CAREFULLY TO LANGUAGE BY QUOTING OR PARAPHRASING&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-size:85%;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-style: italic;"&gt;Piper has “been doing pieces the significance and experience of which is defined as completely as possible by the viewer’s reaction and interpretation. Ideally the work has no meaning or independent existence outside of its function as a medium of change” (Kester 69). In other words, there is no real intent with many of Piper’s art projects. The defining aspect of her works depend entirely on the audiences interpretation and reaction. &lt;/span&gt;PIERSON TRIMARCHI&lt;/span&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3634709129539905758-7229036564788743168?l=salt-marsh.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/feeds/7229036564788743168/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=3634709129539905758&amp;postID=7229036564788743168' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/7229036564788743168'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/7229036564788743168'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/2007/11/winning-writing.html' title='Winning Writing'/><author><name>Fereshteh</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3634709129539905758.post-8983987056084486989</id><published>2007-11-07T11:20:00.000-05:00</published><updated>2007-11-07T11:21:34.805-05:00</updated><title type='text'>drop-in hours for essay feedback</title><content type='html'>WED 12:45-5:30&lt;br /&gt;THURS+FRI are open by appointment, please email me&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3634709129539905758-8983987056084486989?l=salt-marsh.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/feeds/8983987056084486989/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=3634709129539905758&amp;postID=8983987056084486989' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/8983987056084486989'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/8983987056084486989'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/2007/11/drop-in-hours-for-essay-feedback.html' title='drop-in hours for essay feedback'/><author><name>Fereshteh</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3634709129539905758.post-3145325485286834743</id><published>2007-11-07T11:15:00.000-05:00</published><updated>2007-11-07T18:39:43.434-05:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='essay3'/><title type='text'>art, antagonism, and strategy #4</title><content type='html'>Many of you are writing about why an artist project would be so antagonistic to its audience, and why the artists are so critical of their audience. Consider why and how comedians like Chris Rock or Dave Chappelle make jokes about white people. Consider this quote about comedian Richard Pryor, as the author compares him to Bill Cosby. You may see the original article here:&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.popmatters.com/film/features/051215-richardpryor.shtml"&gt;http://www.popmatters.com/film/features/051215-richardpryor.shtml&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-style: italic;"&gt;But for all of those black performers who sought to make themselves palatable to whites, there were other examples of folk, who poet and Miles Davis biographer Quincy Troupe describes as "unreconstructed"; &lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;folk who never sought to remix blackness for white comfort or consumption. &lt;/span&gt;While such "unreconstructed-ness" is largely a myth -- we all capitulate to the so-called "white gaze" in one form of another to gain access to institutions we deem important to our well being -- it helped create mythic icons, which became synonymous with not dancing the dance of racial ingratiation. Miles Davis is the most visible example of this.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Think about expanding your thinking about these projects to pop culture that you know: music, movies, comedy, tv.&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3634709129539905758-3145325485286834743?l=salt-marsh.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/feeds/3145325485286834743/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=3634709129539905758&amp;postID=3145325485286834743' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/3145325485286834743'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/3145325485286834743'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/2007/11/what-does-richard-pryor-have-to-do-with.html' title='art, antagonism, and strategy #4'/><author><name>Fereshteh</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3634709129539905758.post-6368714718287318261</id><published>2007-11-07T09:16:00.000-05:00</published><updated>2007-11-07T11:11:54.084-05:00</updated><title type='text'>quote integration &amp; project description exercise</title><content type='html'>&lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;1- the good: PAYING CAREFUL ATTENTION TO LANGUAGE (strategy 6) &lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;the bad: using generalizing language and evaluative assumptions&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;i&gt;&lt;br /&gt;When asked to describe his intentions for the film, Kashmere starts by stating that “One intention was to present a revisionist history of Canada-Soviet Summit Series, which is now so ingrained in the national mythology" (Kashmere). The use of the word revisionist is interesting in this context because the issue that Kashmere’s film tackles is not cut and dry. Correlation between violence and hockey can be sensibly argued from both sides of the issue.  JORDAN LYNDAKER&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/i&gt;&lt;br /&gt;FT's comment: This is a good point for analysis, to focus on his language and the use of the word "revisionist". But then your language becomes generalizing  ("cut and dry") and you make evaluative assumptions ("sensibly argued") that only serve to weaken your point.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;2- HAVE YOU DESCRIBED YOUR PROJECT?&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="font-style: italic;"&gt;The confection was a simple chocolate bar with almonds enveloped in a mustard yellow wrapper with navy blue and white detailing. The workers of the union designed the wrapper, placing the union’s logo on the right of the old-fashioned paper wrapper. Behind the script name of the candy bar is an American Flag, waving just behind the “We” of “We Got It!.” In the actual packaging, the cardboard is an Irish green with the yellow and red faces of actual union workers. They are holding a giant “We Got It!” banner, and above it reads “Now You Get It! (Sperandio). COURTNEY ALLESSIO&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span&gt;Did she get it right? What other details could she have added? Click &lt;/span&gt;&lt;a href="http://picasaweb.google.com/Sperandio/GrennanAndSperandioKartoonKings/photo#5105960093168168738"&gt;&lt;span&gt;HERE &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;span&gt;to find out.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;When you describe your project, describe any visual evidence you have of the piece. Even if it's just one photograph, this is the documentation that represents the piece for the whole world to remember it by, so it holds a very important place and it serves as the only visual evidence about how people know about a project.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;If you have the luxury of watching a film or video, make sure to pay attention to the sound, the editing, the voice-over, the music. All these are FORMAL elements, that when described precisely, can help you to pull out interesting observations and analysis. You can use these details as quotes, in the same way that you quote from a book or article.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3634709129539905758-6368714718287318261?l=salt-marsh.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/feeds/6368714718287318261/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=3634709129539905758&amp;postID=6368714718287318261' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/6368714718287318261'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/6368714718287318261'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/2007/11/quote-integration-project-description.html' title='quote integration &amp; project description exercise'/><author><name>Fereshteh</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3634709129539905758.post-1206880613223618585</id><published>2007-11-06T16:11:00.000-05:00</published><updated>2007-11-07T19:59:55.552-05:00</updated><title type='text'>useful essay 3 links</title><content type='html'>&lt;span style="font-style: italic;"&gt;I will add to this post as I continue commenting on your blogs. Check back soon for more.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold; color: rgb(51, 0, 153);"&gt;damali ayo&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;audio piece: Living Flag: &lt;a href="http://www.fereshteh.net/salty/damali_ayo.mp3"&gt;LINK to MP3&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;How does this compare to the YouTube video?&lt;br /&gt;How is the title of the piece connected to her project?&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span&gt;Note that ayo spells her name in all lower case.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;////////////////////////////////////////////////////&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold; color: rgb(51, 0, 153);"&gt;Gabriel Gomez-Pena/Coco Fusco&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span&gt;Check out this piece from a show called Radio Diaries. Click on the photo to hear the MP3.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a href="http://radiodiariespodcast.blogspot.com/2007/05/pygmy-in-zoo.html"&gt;http://radiodiariespodcast.blogspot.com/2007/05/pygmy-in-zoo.html&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;////////////////////////////////////////////////////&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold; color: rgb(51, 0, 153);"&gt;Jeremy Deller&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;He won the Turner Prize, one of the top art prizes in the UK.&lt;br /&gt;Here's is more info from the Tate Britain museum website: &lt;a href="http://www.tate.org.uk/britain/turnerprize/2004/deller.shtm"&gt;LINK&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;A profile on Deller in The Guardian newspaper: &lt;a href="http://arts.guardian.co.uk/turnerprize2004/story/0,,1365685,00.html"&gt;LINK&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="font-style: italic;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-style: italic;"&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;////////////////////////////////////////////////////&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold; color: rgb(51, 204, 255);"&gt;&lt;span style="color: rgb(51, 0, 153);"&gt;The Yes Men&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;Some clips are on-line, but if you are writing about this it would help you to watch the whole movie. Ask me for my copy.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;In this interview with Bill Moyers, they address the ethics of their projects: &lt;a href="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PC1DcdOMXyc"&gt;LINK&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;The Yes Men, like Ayo and Fusco/Gomez-Pena, use INVSIBLE THEATER, a concept developed by Augusto Boal: &lt;a href="http://www.communityarts.net/readingroom/archivefiles/1999/12/glossary_of_ter_1.php"&gt;http://www.communityarts.net/readingroom/archivefiles/1999/12/glossary_of_ter_1.php&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;////////////////////////////////////////////////////&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold; color: rgb(51, 0, 153);"&gt;damali ayo&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold; color: rgb(51, 0, 153);"&gt;, Adrian Piper , &lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold; color: rgb(51, 0, 153);"&gt;Gabriel Gomez-Pena/Coco Fusco&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span&gt;White people and hip-hop: a radio podcast &lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.addictedtorace.com/?p=136"&gt;http://www.addictedtorace.com/?p=136&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;This is an interview with the author of  a book that's in the SU library collection: &lt;/span&gt;&lt;i&gt;&lt;strong&gt;&lt;bdo&gt;&lt;i&gt;&lt;strong&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: normal;"&gt;Other people's property : a shadow history of hip-hop in white America &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/i&gt;&lt;/bdo&gt;&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/i&gt;&lt;strong&gt;&lt;bdo&gt;&lt;strong&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: normal;"&gt;- Jason Tanz&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/bdo&gt;&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;i&gt;&lt;strong&gt;&lt;bdo&gt;&lt;i&gt;&lt;strong&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/i&gt;&lt;/bdo&gt;&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/i&gt;&lt;strong&gt;&lt;bdo&gt;&lt;strong&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: normal;"&gt;another interesting book in the SU library collection: &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/bdo&gt;&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;i&gt;&lt;strong&gt;&lt;bdo&gt;&lt;i&gt;&lt;strong&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/i&gt;&lt;/bdo&gt;&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/i&gt;&lt;span style="font-style: italic;"&gt;  Why white kids love hip-hop : wankstas, wiggers, wannabes, and the new reality of race in America &lt;/span&gt;- Bakari Kitwana&lt;span style="font-style: italic;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold; color: rgb(51, 204, 255);"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.wiretapmag.org/race/43254/"&gt;http://www.wiretapmag.org/race/43254/&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;suggested by Justin Arena&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;What is white privilege? What does white privilege have to do with reparations?&lt;br /&gt;Please see this:&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a href="http://uts.cc.utexas.edu/%7Erjensen/freelance/whiteprivilege.htm"&gt;http://uts.cc.utexas.edu/~rjensen/freelance/whiteprivilege.htm&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;It is linked from here: &lt;a href="http://whiteprivilege.com/"&gt;http://whiteprivilege.com&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;The NPR story at the top of the blog is a really good example.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Please also see the big project from Brown University, acknowledging their connection to the slave trade. Even though people who go to school and teach at Brown may not be directly descended from slave owners, they still benefit from the fact that this slave-trading family left&lt;span class="on" style="display: block;" id="formatbar_CreateLink" title="Link" onmouseover="ButtonHoverOn(this);" onmouseout="ButtonHoverOff(this);" onmouseup="" onmousedown="CheckFormatting(event);FormatbarButton('richeditorframe', this, 8);ButtonMouseDown(this);"&gt;&lt;/span&gt; the money to build their school.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.brown.edu/Research/Slavery_Justice/"&gt;http://www.brown.edu/Research/Slavery_Justice/&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;What if you consider that this whole country was built on the profits of the slave trade?&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Acknowledging the profits American society has made from slavery is happening on a city-wide level as well. It's called the Slavery-Era Disclosure Ordinance:&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.newsweek.com/id/62902"&gt;http://www.newsweek.com/id/62902&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Here is an another project all about Chicago's Slavery-Era Disclosure Ordinance made by Keith and Mendi Obadike, who's Ebay project we looked at before:&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a href="http://bighouse.northwestern.edu/"&gt;http://bighouse.northwestern.edu/&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;////////////////////////////////////////////////////&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold; color: rgb(51, 0, 153);"&gt;Adrian Piper&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-style: italic;"&gt;Cornered&lt;/span&gt; was a video installation, here is documentation on Google Video:  &lt;a href="http://tinyurl.com/2a8qoj"&gt;http://tinyurl.com/2a8qoj&lt;/a&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3634709129539905758-1206880613223618585?l=salt-marsh.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/feeds/1206880613223618585/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=3634709129539905758&amp;postID=1206880613223618585' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/1206880613223618585'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/1206880613223618585'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/2007/11/useful-essay-3-links.html' title='useful essay 3 links'/><author><name>Fereshteh</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3634709129539905758.post-610726851165507358</id><published>2007-11-06T13:49:00.000-05:00</published><updated>2007-11-06T16:09:21.630-05:00</updated><title type='text'>Dave Chappelle on reparations</title><content type='html'>&lt;a href="http://www.jibjab.com/view/140957#login_popup"&gt;http://www.jibjab.com/view/140957#login_popup&lt;/a&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3634709129539905758-610726851165507358?l=salt-marsh.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/feeds/610726851165507358/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=3634709129539905758&amp;postID=610726851165507358' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/610726851165507358'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/610726851165507358'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/2007/11/dave-chappelles-reparations-skit.html' title='Dave Chappelle on reparations'/><author><name>Fereshteh</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3634709129539905758.post-7622208346776300018</id><published>2007-11-05T08:31:00.000-05:00</published><updated>2007-11-05T08:51:27.386-05:00</updated><title type='text'>your partners for Wed HW</title><content type='html'>* Tim Kianka : Adrian Piper&lt;br /&gt;* Caryn Rothbort : Brett Kashmere&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt; * Courtney Allessio : Grennan &amp;amp; Sperandio&lt;br /&gt;* Nick Taddeo : Adrian Piper&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt; * Jordan Lyndaker : Brett Kashmere&lt;br /&gt;* Cristina Posilovic : Damali Ayo&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;* Deanna Rose : Damali Ayo&lt;br /&gt; * Michael Lefko : Jeremy Deller&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;* Max Levitt : Brett Kashmere&lt;br /&gt;* Claire Healey : Haha&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;* Lauren Glass :  Brett Kashmere&lt;br /&gt;* Lauren Joffe : Adrian Piper&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;* Amy Marisavljevic : Damali Ayo&lt;br /&gt;* Sam Ohashi-White : Jeremy Deller&lt;br /&gt;--------------------------------------------&lt;br /&gt;* Blair Dudik : Coco Fusco &amp;amp; Guillermo Gomez-Pena&lt;br /&gt;* Rachael Datello : The Yes Men&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;*  Alyssa Rogers : Adrian Piper&lt;br /&gt;* Jason Wang : Brett Kashmere&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;* Justin Arena : Damali Ayo&lt;br /&gt;* Rick Dojan : Brett Kashmere&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;* Zack Owens : Brett Kashmere&lt;br /&gt;* Matt Conte : Damali Ayo&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;* Stephanie Musat : Coco Fusco &amp;amp; Guillermo Gomez-Pena&lt;br /&gt;* Pierson Trimarchi : Adrian Piper&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3634709129539905758-7622208346776300018?l=salt-marsh.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/feeds/7622208346776300018/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=3634709129539905758&amp;postID=7622208346776300018' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/7622208346776300018'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/7622208346776300018'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/2007/11/your-partners-for-wed-hw.html' title='your partners for Wed HW'/><author><name>Fereshteh</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3634709129539905758.post-8287910624580793017</id><published>2007-11-05T08:20:00.000-05:00</published><updated>2007-11-09T17:55:26.590-05:00</updated><title type='text'>week 11: essay 3</title><content type='html'>&lt;span&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold; color: rgb(255, 0, 0);"&gt;Monday 5 November:&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;HW: Bring one printed copy of essay 3 to class&lt;br /&gt;Visiting artists &lt;a href="http://avalanchecollective.net/"&gt;Avalanche Collective&lt;/a&gt; will speak to our class about their public art projects.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold; color: rgb(255, 0, 0);"&gt;Wednesday 7 November: writing workshop&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;HW: Bring marked copy of your partner's essay to class. You will be graded on how well you give suggestions to your partner, focusing on content and structure, not just style or grammar tips (though these will help too).&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;For each quote that the author of the paper (your partner) cites, indicate how the author has used one of the 6 strategies for using resources in Chapter 12. &lt;span style="color: rgb(255, 102, 0);"&gt;Do this on a separate piece of paper. &lt;/span&gt;Write a note about HOW each quote addresses the strategy.  If a citation does not address any of the 6, choose one and suggest a way that the author could change the passage.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="color: rgb(255, 0, 0); font-weight: bold;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Friday 9 November: writing workshop&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;HW: Bring one copy of your revised essay to class. Your essay should be evolving over the course of the week in response to the peer edits and to your own RESEARCH on the art piece.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold; color: rgb(255, 0, 0);"&gt;Monday 12 November:&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;ESSAY 3 FINAL DUE IN TOLLEY 301 BY 4 PM. 25% of your semester grade.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Remember, you should use TWO of the three course texts and at least TWO outside resources that are journals or books. Websites and videos are allowed in addition to this, but you must have at least 2 print resources.&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3634709129539905758-8287910624580793017?l=salt-marsh.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/feeds/8287910624580793017/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=3634709129539905758&amp;postID=8287910624580793017' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/8287910624580793017'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/8287910624580793017'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/2007/11/week-11-essay-3.html' title='week 11: essay 3'/><author><name>Fereshteh</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3634709129539905758.post-1392971385568961126</id><published>2007-11-01T12:46:00.000-04:00</published><updated>2007-11-01T12:48:32.125-04:00</updated><title type='text'>link to essay 3 criteria</title><content type='html'>&lt;a href="http://docs.google.com/Doc?id=d32wwqt_15gn5m8p"&gt;http://docs.google.com/Doc?id=d32wwqt_15gn5m8p&lt;/a&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3634709129539905758-1392971385568961126?l=salt-marsh.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/feeds/1392971385568961126/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=3634709129539905758&amp;postID=1392971385568961126' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/1392971385568961126'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/1392971385568961126'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/2007/11/link-to-essay-3-criteria.html' title='link to essay 3 criteria'/><author><name>Fereshteh</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3634709129539905758.post-771892955584346954</id><published>2007-10-30T23:23:00.000-04:00</published><updated>2007-11-05T08:20:50.700-05:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='schedule'/><title type='text'>week 10: Kwon and essay 3</title><content type='html'>&lt;span style="font-weight: bold; color: rgb(255, 0, 0);"&gt;TWO OPTIONS FOR BLOG THIS WEEK!&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;Each option requires that you read pages 100-120 in Kwon for Monday's class. In this passage, she describes an exhibit called "Culture in Action" in Chicago that featured the following projects:&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-size:85%;"&gt;-Daniel Martinez, VinZula Kara, and the West Side Three-Point Marchers: &lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="font-style: italic;font-size:85%;" &gt;Consequences of a Gesture and 100 Victories/10,000 Tears &lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="font-size:85%;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;-Simon Grennan and Christopher Sperandio  and the Bakery, Confectionary and Tobacco Workers' International Union of America Local No. 552: &lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="font-style: italic;font-size:85%;" &gt;We Got It!&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="font-size:85%;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;-Haha and Flood: A Volunteer Network for Active Participation in Healthcare: &lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="font-style: italic;font-size:85%;" &gt;Flood&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="font-size:85%;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;-Inigo Manglano-Ovalle and Street-Level Video: &lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="font-style: italic;font-size:85%;" &gt;Tele Vecindario&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="font-size:85%;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;-Mark Dion and the Chicago Urban Ecology Action Group: &lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="font-style: italic;font-size:85%;" &gt;The Chicago Urban Ecology Action Group&lt;br /&gt;-&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="font-size:85%;"&gt;Kate Ericson, Mel Ziegler, and Ogden Court Apartments: &lt;span style="font-style: italic;"&gt;Eminent Domain&lt;br /&gt;-&lt;/span&gt;Robert Peters and Mushroom Pickers, Ghosts, Frogs and other “Others“&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="font-size:85%;"&gt;: &lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="font-style: italic;font-size:85%;" &gt;Naming Others: Manufacturing Yourself&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;I have purposefully not included Suzanne Lacey's &lt;span style="font-style: italic;"&gt;Full Circle&lt;/span&gt;.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold; color: rgb(0, 153, 0);"&gt;OPTION 1 BLOG, DUE AT 6 pm SUNDAY:&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Choose one of these projects and do some brief research so that you have a better idea about it. &lt;/span&gt;&lt;span&gt;You may need to find an article in an art journal database or a book in the library. You will need to use an ART database, as you won't have much luck with the history or science databases we used for the last essay. HINT: Kwon also discusses these projects more in her text so you can look into them there. &lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Then choose a ONE SENTENCE QUOTE from the Kwon reading and use it as a lens for analysis of the project. Remember the strategies we have reviewed from the last &lt;span style="font-style: italic;"&gt;Writing Analytically&lt;/span&gt; reading. How can you create a conversation between the quote and the project you have chosen? &lt;/span&gt;&lt;span&gt;Paraphrase the quote and, if appropriate, &lt;/span&gt;&lt;span&gt;use your source to &lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;ask a question&lt;/span&gt; about the project.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="color: rgb(0, 153, 0); font-weight: bold;"&gt;OPTION 2 BLOG, DUE 12 noon THURSDAY:&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Attend the Mary Jane Jacob lecture on Tuesday. TAKE NOTES! Write about it in your blog as it relates to a ONE SENTENCE QUOTE from the Kwon reading. You will still need to have the reading completed for Monday's class, but you will have until Thursday to blog about it as it relates to the Tuesday lecture&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="color: rgb(255, 0, 0); font-weight: bold;"&gt;Monday 29 October: &lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;screening of &lt;span style="font-style: italic;"&gt;Couple in a Cage&lt;/span&gt; &amp;amp; discussion about "Culture in Action". Bring one question and one comment in your notebook.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold; color: rgb(255, 0, 0);"&gt;Tuesday 30 October 7pm:&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold; color: rgb(0, 153, 0);"&gt;Mary Jane Jacob lecture in  &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold; color: rgb(0, 153, 0);"&gt;Arnold M. Grant Auditorium&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold; color: rgb(255, 0, 0);"&gt;Wednesday 31 October:&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;HW: study for Grammar Slammer test&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span&gt;BLOG: Post your subject matter for essay 3 with the following components:&lt;br /&gt;1-CHOOSE the art project your essay will be about&lt;br /&gt;2-TWO questions you have about the project&lt;br /&gt;3-LIST of 4 books or articles (no internet resources) about your subject. You may edit this list later, but for now, you want to investigate the range of possibilities. You don't need to read or print them yet, but you do need to indicate title of the article, journal title, and author. &lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="color: rgb(0, 153, 0); font-weight: bold;"&gt;&lt;span style="color: rgb(255, 0, 0);"&gt;Thursday 1 November, 12 noon: &lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;OPTION 2 BLOG DUE&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold; color: rgb(255, 0, 0);"&gt;Friday 2 November:&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;BLOG HW: Post an outline for your essay with:&lt;br /&gt;1-TOPIC SENTENCE for each paragraph, in order of appearance. Before you write your topic sentence, make sure you have decided &lt;span style="color: rgb(102, 51, 255); font-weight: bold;"&gt;WHAT &lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold; color: rgb(102, 51, 255);"&gt;QUESTION&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="color: rgb(102, 51, 255); font-weight: bold;"&gt; IS THE PARAGRAPH ADDRESSING? &lt;/span&gt;Note that each paragraph &lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;doesn't need to literally ask a question&lt;/span&gt; (you may not have a question mark in sight), &lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;nor does it need to literally &lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="font-style: italic; font-weight: bold;"&gt;&lt;span style="font-style: italic;"&gt;&lt;/span&gt;answer&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt; a question&lt;/span&gt;, but a question, conundrum, dilemma, or complexity should be at the heart of each paragraph. Can you work with the questions from your last blog entry?&lt;br /&gt;2-2 versions of the THESIS, for beginning and end of your essay. Don't just reword it. HOW WILL IT EVOLVE?&lt;br /&gt;3-ONE QUOTE from 2 of the journals and the 2 textbooks that you plan to use. By this point you should have started reading and reviewing your sources for the essay.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3634709129539905758-771892955584346954?l=salt-marsh.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/feeds/771892955584346954/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=3634709129539905758&amp;postID=771892955584346954' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/771892955584346954'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/771892955584346954'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/2007/10/week-10-11-kwon-and-essay-3.html' title='week 10: Kwon and essay 3'/><author><name>Fereshteh</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3634709129539905758.post-3191174671451755458</id><published>2007-10-29T21:39:00.000-04:00</published><updated>2007-10-29T22:01:47.746-04:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='projects'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='links'/><title type='text'>Bunnies, Elephants, Kids</title><content type='html'>&lt;a onblur="try {parent.deselectBloggerImageGracefully();} catch(e) {}" href="http://www.decordova.org/Decordova/images/exhibitions/2006/Animals/Komar.Melamid.jpg"&gt;&lt;img style="margin: 0pt 10px 10px 0pt; float: left; cursor: pointer; width: 200px;" src="http://www.decordova.org/Decordova/images/exhibitions/2006/Animals/Komar.Melamid.jpg" alt="" border="0" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;a onblur="try {parent.deselectBloggerImageGracefully();} catch(e) {}" href="http://www.ekac.org/albagreen.jpeg"&gt;&lt;img style="margin: 0pt 10px 10px 0pt; float: left; cursor: pointer; width: 232px; height: 191px;" src="http://www.ekac.org/albagreen.jpeg" alt="" border="0" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;In class today, Alyssa mentioned the new documentary &lt;span style="font-style: italic;"&gt;My Kid Could Paint That&lt;/span&gt;. It's a common thing people say when they don't understand the origins of abstract art. Here is the movie trailer about a little girl who's gotten attention for her scribble paintings. &lt;a href="http://www.sonyclassics.com/mykidcouldpaintthat/"&gt;LINK&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.diacenter.org/km/"&gt;KOMAR and MELAMID&lt;/a&gt; are an artist duo interested in questions about what the art world values. They did a piece where they created the "most wanted" paintings for different countries, based on surveys and poll statistics. Here is a link to info about their support of &lt;a href="http://www.decordova.org/Decordova/exhibit/2006/animals/komar.melamid.html"&gt;ELEPHANT ART&lt;/a&gt;.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;And finally, here is a link to the artist who made the transgenic bunny, &lt;a href="http://www.ekac.org/"&gt;EDUARDO KAC&lt;/a&gt;.&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3634709129539905758-3191174671451755458?l=salt-marsh.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/feeds/3191174671451755458/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=3634709129539905758&amp;postID=3191174671451755458' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/3191174671451755458'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/3191174671451755458'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/2007/10/bunnies-elephants-kids.html' title='Bunnies, Elephants, Kids'/><author><name>Fereshteh</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3634709129539905758.post-1495451557217854902</id><published>2007-10-29T21:13:00.000-04:00</published><updated>2007-10-29T21:21:20.326-04:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='photos'/><title type='text'>humans on display</title><content type='html'>In case you were thinking that the "Couple in a Cage" premise was out of date...&lt;br /&gt;I went to the NY State Fair in early September and made a special visit to the "freak show" booths at the midway. The painted signs outside each stand and the recorded carney voices were the most prominent features. Inside, these human displays had sloppy, effortless exhibits with hazy lighting and covered in dust. Somehow the presentions' nonchalance only served to enhance their offensive premise.&lt;a onblur="try {parent.deselectBloggerImageGracefully();} catch(e) {}" href="http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1112/1298583618_17f2b6cb08_b.jpg"&gt;&lt;img style="margin: 0px auto 10px; display: block; text-align: center; cursor: pointer; width: 320px;" src="http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1112/1298583618_17f2b6cb08_b.jpg" alt="" border="0" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a onblur="try {parent.deselectBloggerImageGracefully();} catch(e) {}" href="http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1007/1298582894_cfb64a594b_b.jpg"&gt;&lt;img style="margin: 0px auto 10px; display: block; text-align: center; cursor: pointer; width: 320px;" src="http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1007/1298582894_cfb64a594b_b.jpg" alt="" border="0" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3634709129539905758-1495451557217854902?l=salt-marsh.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/feeds/1495451557217854902/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=3634709129539905758&amp;postID=1495451557217854902' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/1495451557217854902'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/1495451557217854902'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/2007/10/humans-on-display.html' title='humans on display'/><author><name>Fereshteh</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><media:thumbnail xmlns:media='http://search.yahoo.com/mrss/' url='http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1112/1298583618_17f2b6cb08_t.jpg' height='72' width='72'/><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3634709129539905758.post-1945301005512604096</id><published>2007-10-26T11:59:00.000-04:00</published><updated>2007-10-26T12:35:45.526-04:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='lectures'/><title type='text'>Mary Jane Jacob lecture</title><content type='html'>I just learned that Mary Jane Jacob is giving a lecture at 7pm on Tuesday in Grant&lt;br /&gt;Auditorium. She is the curator who chose all the projects in the art show that Kwon writes&lt;br /&gt;about in the reading for Sunday.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;If you are able to attend, you may POSTPONE your blog entry to Thursday at 12 noon.&lt;br /&gt;Instead of the original assignment, write about this event as it relates to the reading. If&lt;br /&gt;you decide to do this, you will still need to read for class on Monday.&lt;br /&gt;AND/OR:&lt;br /&gt;Even if you choose to do the regular blog entry for Sunday, you could use this lecture as&lt;br /&gt;a resource for your essay. It could be one of your outside sources, instead of or in&lt;br /&gt;addition to, a book or journal.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Those who can't attend will have their blog entries due at the same time, on Sunday.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;This is a really great coincidence that matches perfectly with the reading and essay 3,&lt;br /&gt;so I want to encourage you all to go!&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;|||||||||||||||||||||||||&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Making Space for Art&lt;br /&gt;Tuesday, October 30, 2007&lt;br /&gt;7:00 pm in the Arnold M. Grant Auditorium&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Mary Jane Jacob will talk about her projects that encompass artistic, curatorial, public,&lt;br /&gt;and community practices.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Considered a nonconformist among U.S. curators, Jacob has organized such innovative&lt;br /&gt;exhibitions as &lt;span style="font-style: italic;"&gt;Places with a Past&lt;/span&gt; in Charleston (1991), &lt;span style="font-style: italic;"&gt;Culture in Action&lt;/span&gt; in&lt;br /&gt;Chicago (1993), &lt;span style="font-style: italic;"&gt;Conversations at The Castle&lt;/span&gt; in Atlanta (1996), and &lt;span style="font-style: italic;"&gt;Evoking History&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-style: italic;"&gt; in Charleston&lt;/span&gt; (2001-present). She recently co-edited &lt;span style="font-style: italic;"&gt;Buddha Mind in Contemporary&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-style: italic;"&gt; Art&lt;/span&gt; (University of California Press, 2004). &lt;a href="http://www.maryjanejacob.org/"&gt;http://www.maryjanejacob.org/&lt;/a&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3634709129539905758-1945301005512604096?l=salt-marsh.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/feeds/1945301005512604096/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=3634709129539905758&amp;postID=1945301005512604096' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/1945301005512604096'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/1945301005512604096'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/2007/10/wow-amazing-timing.html' title='Mary Jane Jacob lecture'/><author><name>Fereshteh</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3634709129539905758.post-4233932780786874099</id><published>2007-10-24T12:47:00.000-04:00</published><updated>2007-10-25T19:51:23.441-04:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='projects'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='links'/><title type='text'>more links related to Wednesday's discussion</title><content type='html'>&lt;a href="http://blackpeopleloveus.com/"&gt;blackpeopleloveus.com&lt;/a&gt; was made by white artists Chelsea and Jonah Peretti&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a href="http://obadike.tripod.com/ebay.html"&gt;blackness for sale on ebay&lt;/a&gt; was made by black artists Keith and Mendi Obadike&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.asu.edu/cfa/wwwcourses/art/SOACore/piper-art-review.html"&gt;Adrian Piper - Calling Cards&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.rent-a-negro.com/"&gt;Damali Ayo - Rent-a-negro&lt;/a&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3634709129539905758-4233932780786874099?l=salt-marsh.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/feeds/4233932780786874099/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=3634709129539905758&amp;postID=4233932780786874099' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/4233932780786874099'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/4233932780786874099'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/2007/10/more-links-related-to-wednesdays.html' title='more links related to Wednesday&apos;s discussion'/><author><name>Fereshteh</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3634709129539905758.post-2811280482964561504</id><published>2007-10-17T17:18:00.000-04:00</published><updated>2007-10-24T08:59:29.686-04:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='schedule'/><title type='text'>week 9: CAE, Piper, Ayo, Kashmere</title><content type='html'>&lt;span style="font-weight: bold; color: rgb(255, 0, 0);"&gt;Sunday 21 October 6 PM BLOG:&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="color: rgb(255, 0, 0);"&gt; &lt;/span&gt;READ pages 37-46 of "Video and Resistance: Against Documentary" in &lt;span style="font-style: italic;"&gt;The Electronic Disturbance&lt;/span&gt; by Critical Art Ensemble. (First full paragraph on page 4 to end of page 13 in PDF). &lt;a href="http://www.critical-art.net/books/ted/ted3.pdf"&gt;LINK to PDF&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;WRITE: Briefly summarize the authors' (it's an artist &lt;span style="font-style: italic;"&gt;group&lt;/span&gt;) claims (5 sentences or less). Compare these views to those of Sontag from earlier this semester. LOOK UP and POST an image from one of the projects mentioned in the article: &lt;span style="font-style: italic;"&gt;Nanook of the North&lt;/span&gt;, &lt;span style="font-style: italic;"&gt;Piss Christ&lt;/span&gt;, Lumiere Bros., or &lt;span style="font-style: italic;"&gt;Birth of a Nation&lt;/span&gt;.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;&lt;span style="color: rgb(255, 0, 0);"&gt;Monday 21 October:&lt;/span&gt; &lt;/span&gt;screening of&lt;span style="font-style: italic;"&gt; &lt;/span&gt;Jeremy Deller's &lt;span style="font-style: italic;"&gt;The Battle of Orgreave&lt;/span&gt; and discussion on "Video and Resistance"&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;&lt;span style="color: rgb(255, 0, 0);"&gt;Wednesday 23 October:&lt;/span&gt; &lt;/span&gt;HW: READ Adrian Piper's "Notes on Funk" in &lt;span style="font-style: italic;"&gt;Participation&lt;/span&gt; 130-134. How does this project compare with artist Damali Ayo's &lt;a href="http://damaliayo.com/pages/reparationsday.html"&gt;"National Day of Panhandling for Reparations"&lt;/a&gt; (check out the YouTube video on her site). How does each project engage the audience in participation? How does each project raise issues about race and racism? We will have a discussion about these questions. WRITE IN YOUR NOTEBOOK: one comment and one ANALYTICAL QUESTION. Note that Piper's work is also discussed in our previous readings from Kester.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold; color: rgb(255, 0, 0);"&gt;Friday 25 October:&lt;/span&gt; visiting filmmaker &lt;a href="http://www.brettkashmere.com/"&gt;BRETT KASHMERE&lt;/a&gt;!&lt;br /&gt;HW: Read a review of his film, &lt;span style="font-style: italic;"&gt;Valery's Ankle&lt;/span&gt;. &lt;a href="http://www.sceneandheard.ca/article.php?id=2019"&gt;LINK&lt;/a&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3634709129539905758-2811280482964561504?l=salt-marsh.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/feeds/2811280482964561504/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=3634709129539905758&amp;postID=2811280482964561504' title='1 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/2811280482964561504'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/2811280482964561504'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/2007/10/week-10-cae-piper-ayo-kashmere.html' title='week 9: CAE, Piper, Ayo, Kashmere'/><author><name>Fereshteh</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>1</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3634709129539905758.post-7149073287754851987</id><published>2007-10-17T08:35:00.000-04:00</published><updated>2007-10-17T09:11:20.557-04:00</updated><title type='text'>writing workshop: using sources to ask questions</title><content type='html'>&lt;span style="font-style: italic;"&gt;"Now mining sites and contaminated harbors and river bottoms are an increasingly large part of the Superfund budget. The tax has no connection with these sites. Superfund is the cleanup party of last resort - a government function properly paid for by taxpayers."   (&lt;/span&gt;Marianne Lamont Horinko, assistant administrator of the Environmental Protection Agency)&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.csmonitor.com/2003/1114/p02s01-usgn.html?related"&gt;http://www.csmonitor.com/2003/1114/p02s01-usgn.html?related&lt;/a&gt;&lt;span style="font-style: italic;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="font-family:Verdana;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="font-style: italic;"&gt;"A corporation's job is to make money, and when you have an expensive long-term capital investment like cleaning up Superfund sites and no one is standing there asking you to do it, then you don't spend the money on it," said Rena Steinzor, an environmental law professor at the University of Maryland who helped write the Superfund reauthorization amendments in 1986 when she was a congressional staffer.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.publicintegrity.org/Superfund/report.aspx?aid=853"&gt;http://www.publicintegrity.org/Superfund/report.aspx?aid=853&lt;/a&gt; &lt;b&gt;&lt;cite&gt;&lt;/cite&gt;&lt;/b&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3634709129539905758-7149073287754851987?l=salt-marsh.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/feeds/7149073287754851987/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=3634709129539905758&amp;postID=7149073287754851987' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/7149073287754851987'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/7149073287754851987'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/2007/10/writing-workshop-using-sources-to-ask.html' title='writing workshop: using sources to ask questions'/><author><name>Fereshteh</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3634709129539905758.post-4798205098532620030</id><published>2007-10-13T12:38:00.000-04:00</published><updated>2007-10-24T08:59:51.353-04:00</updated><title type='text'>week 8: ESSAY 2 REVISION</title><content type='html'>&lt;span style="color: rgb(255, 0, 0); font-weight: bold;"&gt;Sunday 14 October 6pm BLOG:&lt;/span&gt; Meet with your group to swap the writing feedback and take photos of the lake. POST revision of your paper based on peer feedback and the article from &lt;span style="font-style: italic;"&gt;Writing Analytically&lt;/span&gt;.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="color: rgb(255, 0, 0); font-weight: bold;"&gt;Monday 15 October:&lt;/span&gt; Screening of documentary about Onondaga Lake. mid-term instructor evaluations.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="color: rgb(255, 0, 0); font-weight: bold;"&gt;Wednesday 17 October: &lt;/span&gt;writing workshop. Bring 1 printed copy of the freewriting exercise from &lt;span style="font-style: italic;"&gt;Writing Analytically &lt;/span&gt;&lt;span&gt;in&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="font-style: italic;"&gt; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;span&gt;Chapter 12.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold; color: rgb(255, 0, 0);"&gt;Friday 19 October:&lt;/span&gt; ESSAY 2 REVISION DUE IN TOLLEY 301 OFFICE BY 5 PM. Please make sure to include all elements of the portfolio as indicated in the handout I distributed during our writing conferences. Place all materials in a folder or envelope with your name clearly marked on the outside.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3634709129539905758-4798205098532620030?l=salt-marsh.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/feeds/4798205098532620030/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=3634709129539905758&amp;postID=4798205098532620030' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/4798205098532620030'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/4798205098532620030'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/2007/10/week-9-essay-2-revision.html' title='week 8: ESSAY 2 REVISION'/><author><name>Fereshteh</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3634709129539905758.post-6714777866713037392</id><published>2007-10-08T13:32:00.000-04:00</published><updated>2007-10-08T21:03:04.752-04:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='schedule'/><title type='text'>mid-term writing conferences</title><content type='html'>Meet in Tolley 205. Please be ON TIME so that other people's appointments don't get backed up.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Bring to the meeting:&lt;br /&gt;- at least 1 new resource (book, article, website) that you will be using for your&lt;br /&gt;revision. You can link to websites on your blog but online journals need to be printed.&lt;br /&gt;- the library worksheet about evaluating sources, applied to one of your resources (it should be a JOURNAL article)&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;TUES&lt;br /&gt;3:15 Jason&lt;br /&gt;4:00 Lauren J.&lt;br /&gt;4:15 Sam&lt;br /&gt;5:00 Courtney&lt;br /&gt;5:15 Claire&lt;br /&gt;5:30 Rick&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;WED&lt;br /&gt;9:30 Tim&lt;br /&gt;9:45 Deanna&lt;br /&gt;10:00 Nick&lt;br /&gt;10:15 Mike&lt;br /&gt;10:30 Amy&lt;br /&gt;11:00 Caryn&lt;br /&gt;11:15 Cristina&lt;br /&gt;11:30 Rachael&lt;br /&gt;11:45 Matt&lt;br /&gt;12:00 Pierson&lt;br /&gt;12:15 Stephanie&lt;br /&gt;12:30 Alyssa&lt;br /&gt;12:45 Justin&lt;br /&gt;1:00 Max&lt;br /&gt;1:30 Jordan&lt;br /&gt;1:45 Lauren G.&lt;br /&gt;2:30 Zack&lt;br /&gt;3:45 Blair&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3634709129539905758-6714777866713037392?l=salt-marsh.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/feeds/6714777866713037392/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=3634709129539905758&amp;postID=6714777866713037392' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/6714777866713037392'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/6714777866713037392'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/2007/10/mid-term-writing-conferences.html' title='mid-term writing conferences'/><author><name>Fereshteh</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3634709129539905758.post-4118605423287551498</id><published>2007-10-04T13:09:00.000-04:00</published><updated>2007-10-04T13:27:08.579-04:00</updated><title type='text'>citations continued</title><content type='html'>Use either &lt;span&gt;italics&lt;/span&gt; &lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;or&lt;/span&gt; underlining throughout your essay for the titles of longer works and, only when absolutely necessary, providing emphasis.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;How to cite articles from on-line databases &lt;a href="http://www.hwwilson.com/Documentation/WilsonWeb/howtocite/howtocite.htm"&gt;LINK&lt;/a&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3634709129539905758-4118605423287551498?l=salt-marsh.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/feeds/4118605423287551498/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=3634709129539905758&amp;postID=4118605423287551498' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/4118605423287551498'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/4118605423287551498'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/2007/10/citations-continued.html' title='citations continued'/><author><name>Fereshteh</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3634709129539905758.post-305569587705473862</id><published>2007-10-01T08:26:00.000-04:00</published><updated>2007-10-17T18:14:55.487-04:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='schedule'/><title type='text'>weeks 6-7: library ,  essay 2</title><content type='html'>&lt;span style="color: rgb(255, 0, 0);"&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;Monday 1 October&lt;/span&gt;:&lt;/span&gt; library session about databases&lt;br /&gt;HW: blog about cultural event by 6pm on Sunday the 30th&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold; color: rgb(255, 0, 0);"&gt;Wednesday 3 October:&lt;/span&gt; in-class review of Kester from last week&lt;br /&gt;I will return the quizzes and we will talk about some art projects.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;HW: POST ON YOUR BLOG:&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;1) &lt;span style="font-size:130%;"&gt;Post a narrative synopsis&lt;/span&gt; (written paragraph with full sentences) of the &lt;em&gt;Christian Science Monitor&lt;/em&gt; article (see link below under &lt;span style="font-style: italic;"&gt;essay 2 links&lt;/span&gt;). Make it good enough to use in your essay for next Monday.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;List the key points you plan to address in your essay. &lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;This is not a thesis&lt;/span&gt;, it is a synopsis of the article, to which you will respond in later drafts of your work. It is difficult to have good IDEAS about the issues if you haven’t gathered information yet. You can wait to write a thesis after you have done some research.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;2) &lt;span style="font-size:130%;"&gt;Make a link&lt;/span&gt; to at least one on-line resource that you think might be relevant for background information for your paper. Make a &lt;a href="http://www.w3schools.com/html/tryit.asp?filename=tryhtml_links"&gt;hyperlink&lt;/a&gt; that you can click. &lt;span style="font-style: italic;"&gt;Check Blogger HELP for info on how to do this if you don't know how. In Firefox, the picture-icon in the "compose" function of the "edit posts" will allow you to do it.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;a href="http://sunews.syr.edu/story_details.cfm?id=4359"&gt;&lt;span style="color: rgb(255, 0, 0); font-weight: bold;"&gt;4-6 October&lt;/span&gt; &lt;/a&gt;&lt;a href="http://sunews.syr.edu/story_details.cfm?id=4359"&gt;- SU Human Rights Film Festival &lt;/a&gt;&lt;a href="http://sunews.syr.edu/story_details.cfm?id=4359"&gt;- RECOMMENDED, but no longer required&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold; color: rgb(255, 0, 0);"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Friday 5 October:&lt;/span&gt; Back in the library 046.&lt;br /&gt;HW: &lt;span style="font-size:130%;"&gt;Print&lt;/span&gt; and bring one &lt;em&gt;peer-reviewed&lt;/em&gt; periodical resource for your paper about Onondaga Lake from a DATABASE search (covered on Monday), and bring it to class. &lt;span style="font-size:130%;"&gt;Highlight&lt;/span&gt; at least two passages that seem notable for your paper.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold; color: rgb(255, 0, 0);"&gt;Monday 8 October:&lt;/span&gt; Library 046: evaluating sources&lt;br /&gt;HW: ESSAY 2 DUE - BRING enough COPIES for your group members and FHT.&lt;br /&gt;Make sure you have the right formatting and check MLA style guides!&lt;br /&gt;Sign up for writing conference times.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold; color: rgb(255, 0, 0);"&gt;Wednesday 10 October:&lt;/span&gt; writing conferences with Fereshteh&lt;br /&gt;We will not meet as a group. Bring a new reference that you might use in the revision of your paper (book, article, etc) to the meeting, along with the article evaluation sheet from the library. &lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;Note changed assignment.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold; color: rgb(255, 0, 0);"&gt;Friday 12 October:&lt;/span&gt; No class, Eid&lt;br /&gt;HW: Mark your peer's essay with comments and questions.&lt;br /&gt;Meet with your group over the weekend to review your essays and to get photos if you have not done so already. Discuss how you will print and share the photos.&lt;a href="http://www.critical-art.net/books/ted/ted3.pdf"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold; color: rgb(255, 0, 0);"&gt;Sunday 14 October: 6PM BLOG&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-size:130%;"&gt;Post&lt;/span&gt; a revision of your paper, based on comments from your group and the article from &lt;span style="font-style: italic;"&gt;Writing Analytically&lt;/span&gt; (to be distributed). These should be about content, meaning, analysis, and organization, not just spelling and style.&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3634709129539905758-305569587705473862?l=salt-marsh.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/feeds/305569587705473862/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=3634709129539905758&amp;postID=305569587705473862' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/305569587705473862'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/305569587705473862'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/2007/10/weeks-5-6-library-essay-2-research.html' title='weeks 6-7: library ,  essay 2'/><author><name>Fereshteh</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3634709129539905758.post-6069123136670138036</id><published>2007-09-30T22:17:00.000-04:00</published><updated>2007-10-22T20:24:31.031-04:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='video art'/><title type='text'>Phobia+Dialogic Art</title><content type='html'>&lt;object height="350" width="425"&gt;&lt;param name="movie" value="http://www.youtube.com/v/0SvdlQnNeL0"&gt;&lt;param name="wmode" value="transparent"&gt;&lt;embed src="http://www.youtube.com/v/0SvdlQnNeL0" type="application/x-shockwave-flash" wmode="transparent" height="350" width="425"&gt;&lt;/embed&gt;&lt;/object&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Since many of you attended the lecture about Phobia at the library the other day, I thought I'd post the video about a related dialogic art project.&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3634709129539905758-6069123136670138036?l=salt-marsh.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/feeds/6069123136670138036/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=3634709129539905758&amp;postID=6069123136670138036' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/6069123136670138036'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/6069123136670138036'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/2007/09/phobiadialogic-art.html' title='Phobia+Dialogic Art'/><author><name>Fereshteh</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3634709129539905758.post-8357265042699889085</id><published>2007-09-28T09:29:00.000-04:00</published><updated>2007-09-30T13:23:32.964-04:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='assignments'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='links'/><title type='text'>essay 2 links</title><content type='html'>&lt;a href="http://www.csmonitor.com/2003/1114/p02s01-usgn.html?related"&gt;&lt;span style="font-style: italic;"&gt;Christian Science Monitor&lt;/span&gt; article&lt;/a&gt; &lt;em&gt;The Christian Science Monitor&lt;/em&gt; is a well-respected international newspaper from a U.S. perspective. It includes a daily religious feature, but focuses primarily on secular news coverage.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.superfund365.org/"&gt;Superfund 365 - internet art/science project&lt;/a&gt; It will feature Onondaga Lake on Day 78. Also with good links.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.epa.gov/superfund/"&gt;EPA Superfund site&lt;/a&gt; The Environmental Protection Agency is a federal government organization.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.onlakepartners.org/"&gt;Onondaga Lake Partnership&lt;/a&gt; Lots of good information here.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a href="http://onondagacountyparks.com/parks/olp/"&gt;Onondaga Lake Park - the county parks website&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.safefromtoxics.org/tx.asp?id=456"&gt;campaign to restore polluters pay tax&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Artists and projects with an environmental focus:&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.futurefarmers.com/superfund/"&gt;Gardening Superfund Sites&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.tiffanyholmes.com/"&gt;Tiffany Holmes&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.studiotara.net/"&gt;Ann Rosenthal&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a href="http://cgee.hamline.edu/rivers/Inquiry/RTT/rtt_bsy1.htm"&gt;Keepers of the Waters - Betsy Damon&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.tate.org.uk/learning/artistsinfocus/apg/"&gt;Artists Placement Group&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a href="http://artscenecal.com/ArticlesFile/Archive/Articles1996/Articles0996/CaliforniaWash.html"&gt;California Wash - Helen and Newton Harrison&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.lostrivers.ca/"&gt;Lost River Walks - Toronto&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.greenmuseum.org/"&gt;Green Museum&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.greenarts.org/"&gt;Green Arts&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.andreapolli.com/"&gt;Andrea Polli&lt;/a&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3634709129539905758-8357265042699889085?l=salt-marsh.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/feeds/8357265042699889085/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=3634709129539905758&amp;postID=8357265042699889085' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/8357265042699889085'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/8357265042699889085'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/2007/09/essay-2-link.html' title='essay 2 links'/><author><name>Fereshteh</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3634709129539905758.post-2112859636364015458</id><published>2007-09-26T13:58:00.000-04:00</published><updated>2007-09-26T14:03:02.148-04:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='blog'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='homework'/><title type='text'>Cultural Event Blog :: updated list</title><content type='html'>I added 2 new possibilities but there are still only 6 things  eligible for your blog&lt;br /&gt; entry due Monday 30 September, 6pm.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;You must spend at least ONE HOUR at one of the cultural happenings from the list.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;You will write a DETAILED synopsis as well as a CRITICAL ANALYSIS, using the methods from your essays (NOTICE AND FOCUS, DEVELOPING AN IDEA, 10 ON 1).&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;PLAN AHEAD, as I will not accept any excuses for the fact that something came up at the last minute.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Thu 27 Sept, 4 pm&lt;br /&gt;Phobia: Collecting in the History of Fear, Bird Library, Peter Graham Scholarly Commons (1st floor)&lt;br /&gt;A lecture about fear in the U.S. and the Sacco and Venzetti mural at SU.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Sat 29 Sept: Central New York Anti-War Rally in Syracuse&lt;br /&gt;http://www.peacecouncil.net/September29/index.html&lt;br /&gt;1:00 - 2:00 PM Rally at the Everson plaza in downtown Syracuse&lt;br /&gt;2:30 PM March begins to Syracuse University&lt;br /&gt;4:00 PM - 5:00 PM Rally at Syracuse University (music at 3:30 pm)&lt;br /&gt;7:30 Evening Panel at Hendricks Chapel (Syracuse University)&lt;br /&gt;Jimmy Massey: pro-soldier, anti-war activist, one of the founding members of Iraq&lt;br /&gt; Veterans Against the War.&lt;br /&gt;Dahlia Wasfi: spent her early childhood in Saddam Hussein's Iraq&lt;br /&gt;Scott Ritter: a chief United Nations weapons inspector in Iraq from 1991 to 1998&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;NEW ELIGIBLE ITEM: Faith Ringgold exhibit&lt;br /&gt;Community Folk Art Center, Tue-Fri 10-5, Sat 11-5&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-style:italic;"&gt;Suggested&lt;/span&gt; admission is $5. But you can go for free.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;NEW ELIGIBLE ITEM: SUNDAY September 30, 2PM, $8-10&lt;br /&gt;Abolitionist's Amble - Onondaga Historical Association.&lt;br /&gt;Take a walk through Syracuse 's abolitionist past including Jerry Rescue Monument &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;NEW ELIGIBLE ITEM: Write a letter to the editor of The Daily Orange about the Astria&lt;br /&gt; Suparak situation at the Warehouse Gallery (this will also serve as the blog entry)&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3634709129539905758-2112859636364015458?l=salt-marsh.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/feeds/2112859636364015458/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=3634709129539905758&amp;postID=2112859636364015458' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/2112859636364015458'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/2112859636364015458'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/2007/09/i-added-3-new-possibilities-but-there.html' title='Cultural Event Blog :: updated list'/><author><name>Fereshteh</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3634709129539905758.post-4436262701499941841</id><published>2007-09-26T13:50:00.000-04:00</published><updated>2007-09-26T13:51:05.385-04:00</updated><title type='text'>Homework : Friday the 28th</title><content type='html'>Of the artists and projects Kester discusses, find a book in the library and MAKE A COPY of:&lt;br /&gt;•    1 image of an art work that would be classified as dialogic&lt;br /&gt;•    1 image from an art work that would be classified as avant-garde&lt;br /&gt;Also Make a copy of the title page for each book.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Answer the following questions (your words. 5 sentences or less):&lt;br /&gt;- Summarize Kester's argument about art and commodity.&lt;br /&gt;- Why is Chapter 2 called "The Eyes of the Vulgar"?&lt;br /&gt;- What is semantic labor?&lt;br /&gt;- What do Fry, Bell, Greenberg, and Fried, and Melville have to do with the thesis of Kester's book?&lt;br /&gt;- According to the Harrisons, what is "conversational drift"?&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Meet in the Electronic Training Center Room 046 (go in front door and downstairs)&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3634709129539905758-4436262701499941841?l=salt-marsh.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/feeds/4436262701499941841/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=3634709129539905758&amp;postID=4436262701499941841' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/4436262701499941841'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/4436262701499941841'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/2007/09/homework-friday-28th.html' title='Homework : Friday the 28th'/><author><name>Fereshteh</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3634709129539905758.post-1116992153997965784</id><published>2007-09-24T12:56:00.001-04:00</published><updated>2007-09-24T13:01:11.180-04:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='artists news'/><title type='text'>The Yes Men and The Warehouse Gallery</title><content type='html'>&lt;a onblur="try {parent.deselectBloggerImageGracefully();} catch(e) {}" href="http://141.2.86.23/grafiken/kuenstler/rtmarkyesmen.jpg"&gt;&lt;img style="margin: 0pt 10px 10px 0pt; float: left; cursor: pointer; width: 149px; height: 196px;" src="http://141.2.86.23/grafiken/kuenstler/rtmarkyesmen.jpg" alt="" border="0" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;People all over the world are asking:&lt;br /&gt;Why was a Warehouse/SU show about artist group The Yes Men canceled at the last minute?&lt;br /&gt;Why was the curator fired?&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;The Yes Men &lt;a href="http://www.theyesmen.org/"&gt;LINK&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;letters of support for The Warehouse &lt;a href="http://www.syracuse-warehouse.blogspot.com/"&gt;LINK&lt;/a&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3634709129539905758-1116992153997965784?l=salt-marsh.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/feeds/1116992153997965784/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=3634709129539905758&amp;postID=1116992153997965784' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/1116992153997965784'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/1116992153997965784'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/2007/09/yes-men-and-warehouse-gallery.html' title='The Yes Men and The Warehouse Gallery'/><author><name>Fereshteh</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3634709129539905758.post-1905261463671202334</id><published>2007-09-21T16:00:00.001-04:00</published><updated>2007-09-21T16:00:43.048-04:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='assignments'/><title type='text'>Essay 1 revision</title><content type='html'>For Monday, bring your 1st version of the essay along with the new version that incorporates your revisions based on my feedback and peer feedback. AM CLASS: don't forget the extra paragraphs I forgot to collect on WED.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Remember, for this version I'm asking it to be CUT.&lt;br /&gt;It should be no longer than 2.5 pages, single-spaced.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;THE BEST PAPERS WILL DEMONSTRATE THAT YOU HAVE USED THE TECHNIQUES FROM THE 2 READINGS I GAVE OUT ABOUT WRITING ANALYTICALLY, and the BLOG LINK ABOUT INTEGRATING QUOTES.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Some things everyone should work on:&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;-the strongest introductions use a specific example or detail from observations of the website or your field visits to Armory Square&lt;br /&gt;-NOTICE AND FOCUS - use more detail, AVOID GENERALIZATIONS&lt;br /&gt;-10 on 1 - quality is better than quantity&lt;br /&gt;-What is your THESIS? Can you even find it?&lt;br /&gt;-MAKE AN OUTLINE for your paper before rushing in!&lt;br /&gt;-Does each paragraph support the thesis?&lt;br /&gt;-Is the transition from your writing to quotes from Barthes easy for the reader to follow?&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3634709129539905758-1905261463671202334?l=salt-marsh.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/feeds/1905261463671202334/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=3634709129539905758&amp;postID=1905261463671202334' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/1905261463671202334'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/1905261463671202334'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/2007/09/essay-1-revision.html' title='Essay 1 revision'/><author><name>Fereshteh</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3634709129539905758.post-2265330685218475622</id><published>2007-09-19T23:01:00.000-04:00</published><updated>2007-09-19T23:02:38.709-04:00</updated><title type='text'>The Warehouse Gallery</title><content type='html'>Lots of people are talking about changes happening at The Warehouse Gallery &lt;a href="http://syracuse-warehouse.blogspot.com/"&gt;LINK&lt;/a&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3634709129539905758-2265330685218475622?l=salt-marsh.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/feeds/2265330685218475622/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=3634709129539905758&amp;postID=2265330685218475622' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/2265330685218475622'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/2265330685218475622'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/2007/09/warehouse-gallery.html' title='The Warehouse Gallery'/><author><name>Fereshteh</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3634709129539905758.post-8729738003039582990</id><published>2007-09-19T08:10:00.000-04:00</published><updated>2007-09-19T08:41:33.695-04:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='citation'/><title type='text'>integrating quotations</title><content type='html'>Integrate Quotations from Outside Sources - from Dennis G. Jerz, who writes:&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-style: italic;"&gt;Spend fewer words introducing your sources, and devote more words to expressing and developing your own ideas in ways that use shorter quotations, or even just a few words, from your outside sources. &lt;/span&gt;&lt;a href="http://jerz.setonhill.edu/writing/academic/sources/integrating.htm"&gt;LINK&lt;/a&gt; to examples and more info.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Quotations of 4 or more lines are considered long, and must be indented in MLA style (2 tabs).&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3634709129539905758-8729738003039582990?l=salt-marsh.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/feeds/8729738003039582990/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=3634709129539905758&amp;postID=8729738003039582990' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/8729738003039582990'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/8729738003039582990'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/2007/09/integrating-quotations.html' title='integrating quotations'/><author><name>Fereshteh</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3634709129539905758.post-6415472030714768214</id><published>2007-09-18T22:19:00.000-04:00</published><updated>2007-09-25T10:01:06.379-04:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='citation'/><title type='text'>citing sites</title><content type='html'>&lt;u&gt;Name of Site&lt;/u&gt;. Date of Posting/Revision. Name of institution/organization affiliated with the            &lt;br /&gt;  site(sometimes found in copyright statements). Date you accessed the site [electronic                                         address].&lt;url&gt;&lt;url&gt;&lt;http: com=""&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;In-text citation should refer to a simplified version of the site name (&lt;u&gt;Armory Square&lt;/u&gt;), and it will have no page number since websites don't have page numbers. Remember that the above is not properly indented because I can't do that on this blog.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;MLA in-text citation &lt;a href="http://library.duke.edu/research/citing/within/mla.html"&gt;LINK&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;MLA works cited for electronic sources &lt;a href="http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/557/09/"&gt;LINK&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;http: com=""&gt; &lt;http: com=""&gt;  &lt;/http:&gt;&lt;/http:&gt;&lt;/http:&gt;&lt;/url&gt;&lt;/url&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3634709129539905758-6415472030714768214?l=salt-marsh.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/feeds/6415472030714768214/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=3634709129539905758&amp;postID=6415472030714768214' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/6415472030714768214'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/6415472030714768214'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/2007/09/citing-sites.html' title='citing sites'/><author><name>Fereshteh</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3634709129539905758.post-1371976202489052038</id><published>2007-09-17T10:36:00.000-04:00</published><updated>2007-09-24T13:04:31.210-04:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='schedule'/><title type='text'>week 4-5: writing revisions, Kester 2</title><content type='html'>Mon 17 Sept:&lt;span style="color: rgb(255, 0, 0);"&gt; &lt;span style="color: rgb(255, 102, 0);"&gt;SyracYOUse essay 1 due.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt; 1 copy, printed.  See assignment outline.&lt;br /&gt;writing workshop: the thesis&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Wed 19 Sept:&lt;br /&gt;HW: Read "10 on 1" from &lt;span style="font-style: italic;"&gt;Writing Analytically&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span&gt;, which was distributed in class&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="font-style: italic;"&gt;. &lt;/span&gt;Find a passage from your paper that you would like to revise using the methods outlined in the reading.  It could be any paragraph or other section that needs work. Apply one of the "10 on 1" revision strategies to this passage. Bring 4 printed copies to class with your original passage followed by the revision you made. Do not bring copies of the entire essay.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="color: rgb(153, 102, 51);"&gt;RECOMMENDED EVENT eligible for blog:&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="color: rgb(153, 102, 51);"&gt;Thurs 20 Sept,         12 noon (speakers begin at 3 pm)&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="color: rgb(153, 102, 51);"&gt;Onondaga Lake Park, Liverpool (free shuttles to run from SU)&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="color: rgb(153, 102, 51);"&gt;Roots of Peacemaking: Indigenous Values, Global Crisis&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="color: rgb(153, 102, 51);"&gt;An International Day of Peace at the birthplace of democracy&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="color: rgb(153, 102, 51);"&gt;Haudenosaunee traditional foods, artisans, speakers, music and dancing, plus water ceremony&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a style="color: rgb(153, 102, 51);" href="http://rootsofpeacemaking.syr.edu/"&gt;LINK - http://rootsofpeacemaking.syr.edu&lt;/a&gt;&lt;span style="color: rgb(153, 102, 51);"&gt; or 315-443-3861&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Fri 21 Sept:&lt;br /&gt;No HW, work on your paper. Meet at the Sheraton Hotel, 2nd floor. We will be attending a panel at the SU Minority Studies conference.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="color: rgb(153, 102, 51);"&gt;RECOMMENDED EVENT &lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="color: rgb(153, 102, 51);"&gt; (not eligible for blog):&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="color: rgb(153, 102, 51);"&gt;Sat 23 Sept: Westcott Street Cultural Fair &lt;/span&gt;&lt;a style="color: rgb(153, 102, 51);" href="http://www.westcottfair.org/"&gt;LINK&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="color: rgb(255, 102, 0);"&gt;Mon 24 Sept: SyracYOUse essay 1 revision&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="color: rgb(204, 102, 0);"&gt;RECOMMENDED EVENT &lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="color: rgb(204, 102, 0);"&gt;eligible for blog:&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="color: rgb(204, 102, 0);"&gt;Tues 25 Sept, 7:30 PM - Onondaga Land Rights meeting&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="color: rgb(204, 153, 51);font-size:6;" &gt;&lt;span style="color: rgb(51, 0, 0);font-family:Times New Roman,Times,serif;font-size:100%;"  &gt;The          Warehouse, Fayette and West St. (Connective Corridor shuttle from SU)&lt;br /&gt;Hear an update on the Onondaga Land Rights Action which will be heard          in Federal District Court in Albany on October 11.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="color: rgb(204, 153, 51);font-size:6;" &gt;&lt;span style="color: rgb(51, 0, 0);font-family:Times New Roman,Times,serif;font-size:100%;"  &gt; Speakers:          Onondaga Chief Jake Edwards, Tim Coulter, Executive Director of the Montana-based          Indian Law Resource Center and one of the lawyers representing the Onondagas          in their Land Rights Action and Joan Cope Savage, environmental scientist          and member of NOON.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;p style="color: rgb(204, 153, 51);" align="left"&gt;       &lt;/p&gt;Wed 26 Sept:&lt;br /&gt;READING: KESTER CHAPTER 2 and &lt;span style="color: rgb(255, 102, 0);"&gt;QUIZ&lt;/span&gt; on Kester (intro, ch.1, ch.2)&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="color: rgb(153, 102, 51);"&gt;RECOMMENDED EVENT &lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="color: rgb(153, 102, 51);"&gt;eligible for blog&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="color: rgb(153, 102, 51);"&gt;:&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="color: rgb(153, 102, 51);"&gt;Thu 27 Sept: Phobia: Collecting in the History of Fear&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="color: rgb(153, 102, 51);"&gt;4 pm Bird Library, Peter Graham Scholarly Commons (1st floor)&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Fri 28 Sept: Library Visit 1. Meet at the Electronic Training Center, Bird Library.&lt;br /&gt;HW: TBA&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="color: rgb(153, 102, 51);"&gt;RECOMMENDED EVENT &lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="color: rgb(153, 102, 51);"&gt;eligible for blog:&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="color: rgb(153, 102, 51);"&gt;Sat 29 Sept: Central New York Anti-War Rally in Syracuse. &lt;/span&gt;&lt;a style="color: rgb(153, 102, 51);" href="http://www.peacecouncil.net/September29/index.html"&gt;LINK&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Sun 30 Sept, 6 pm&lt;br /&gt;BLOG entry due : Cultural Event (please see complete list below)&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3634709129539905758-1371976202489052038?l=salt-marsh.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/feeds/1371976202489052038/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=3634709129539905758&amp;postID=1371976202489052038' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/1371976202489052038'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/1371976202489052038'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/2007/09/week-4-5-writing-revisions-kester-2.html' title='week 4-5: writing revisions, Kester 2'/><author><name>Fereshteh</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3634709129539905758.post-1672555842140767925</id><published>2007-09-17T09:34:00.000-04:00</published><updated>2007-09-17T10:35:34.681-04:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='blog'/><title type='text'>Cultural Event Blog</title><content type='html'>BLOG for Monday 30 September, 6pm: Attend one of the following events and write a synopsis of the event&lt;br /&gt;as well as your critical analysis. PLAN AHEAD, as I will not accept any excuses for the fact that something came up at&lt;br /&gt;the last minute.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Tues 18 Sept, Watson Auditorium&lt;br /&gt;What is Queer Visual Culture? Professor Roger Hallas of SU's English department will discuss what exactly constitutes&lt;br /&gt;queer visual culture and why it has been so critical to LGBT identities and communities.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Wed 19 Sept, Warehouse Auditorium&lt;br /&gt;Stella Betts and David Leven: Lecture on the recent work of Leven Betts Architecture Studio&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Thurs 20 Sept, Warehouse Community Classroom, COME ON artist talks&lt;br /&gt;2pm: Juliet Jacobson, artist talk&lt;br /&gt;3pm: Rachel Rampleman, artist talk&lt;br /&gt;You need to stay for the whole lecture, attend one or both&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Thurs 20 Sept, The Warehouse Gallery, 5-8 pm&lt;br /&gt;This is an art opening for COME ON: Desire Under The Female Gaze that includes a reception with food and you can take&lt;br /&gt;a guided tour (optional). If you choose this event, please spend at least 1 hour there.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;COME ON presents art about sexuality women artists who employ diverse media, including large-scale drawing, video installation,&lt;br /&gt;text work and ephemeral sculpture. COME ON reveals what is not represented in popular culture and provides a counterbalance&lt;br /&gt;to the ubiquitous imagery of sexualized female bodies created for mainstream heterosexual male sensibilities.&lt;br /&gt;http://www.thewarehousegallery.org/&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Thurs 20 Sept, 12 noon (speakers begin at 3 pm)&lt;br /&gt;Onondaga Lake Park, Liverpool (free shuttles to run from SU)&lt;br /&gt;Roots of Peacemaking: Indigenous Values, Global Crisis&lt;br /&gt;An International Day of Peace at the birthplace of democracy&lt;br /&gt;Haudenosaunee traditional foods, artisans, speakers, music and dancing, plus water ceremony&lt;br /&gt;http://rootsofpeacemaking.syr.edu or 315-443-3861&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Tues 25 Sept, 7:30 PM, The Warehouse Gallery - Onondaga Land Rights meeting&lt;br /&gt;Hear an update on the Onondaga Land Rights Action that will be heard in Federal District Court in Albany on October&lt;br /&gt;11. Speakers: Onondaga Chief Jake Edwards, Tim Coulter, Executive Director of the Montana-based Indian Law&lt;br /&gt;Resource Center and one of the lawyers representing the Onondagas in their Land Rights Action and Joan Cope&lt;br /&gt;Savage, environmental scientist and member of NOON (Neighbors of Onondaga Nation).&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Thu 27 Sept, 4 pm&lt;br /&gt;Phobia: Collecting in the History of Fear, Bird Library, Peter Graham Scholarly Commons (1st floor)&lt;br /&gt;A lecture about  the Sacco and Venzetti mural at SU and the library archives&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Sat 29 Sept: Central New York Anti-War Rally in Syracuse&lt;br /&gt;http://www.peacecouncil.net/September29/index.html&lt;br /&gt;1:00 - 2:00 PM  Rally at the Everson plaza in downtown Syracuse&lt;br /&gt;2:30 PM March begins to Syracuse University&lt;br /&gt;4:00 PM - 5:00 PM     Rally at Syracuse University (music at 3:30 pm)&lt;br /&gt;7:30     Evening Panel at Hendricks Chapel (Syracuse University)&lt;br /&gt;Jimmy Massey: pro-soldier, anti-war activist, one of the founding members of Iraq Veterans Against the War.&lt;br /&gt;Dahlia Wasfi: spent her early childhood in Saddam Hussein's Iraq&lt;br /&gt;Scott Ritter: a chief United Nations weapons inspector in Iraq   from 1991 to 1998&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3634709129539905758-1672555842140767925?l=salt-marsh.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/feeds/1672555842140767925/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=3634709129539905758&amp;postID=1672555842140767925' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/1672555842140767925'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/1672555842140767925'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/2007/09/for-wed-19-sept-read-10-on-1-from.html' title='Cultural Event Blog'/><author><name>Fereshteh</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3634709129539905758.post-9142847073193602970</id><published>2007-09-14T15:57:00.000-04:00</published><updated>2007-09-14T16:20:28.073-04:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='revision'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='citation'/><title type='text'>Barthes citation and your roughs</title><content type='html'>Some of you have given me a writing sample for review. If anyone else&lt;br /&gt;has something they'd like me to look at, you have by 6pm on Saturday to&lt;br /&gt;submit by email, and I will do my best to respond in a timely manner.&lt;br /&gt;This would be something like a rough draft, as your essay submitted on&lt;br /&gt;Monday should be a finished, revised piece. Have your friends and dorm&lt;br /&gt;mates read over it for understanding and typos. Even if they haven't&lt;br /&gt;been to Armory Square or visited the website, can they learn something&lt;br /&gt;from your piece?&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;DON'T FORGET TO REVIEW THE LENGTH (3-4 PAGES)&lt;br /&gt;and formatting requirements from the handout.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Since you will be citing Barthes, you will need to know the information&lt;br /&gt;about the edition of the photocopy I gave you in order to do the MLA&lt;br /&gt;style.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Barthes, Roland. "The Blue Guide." &lt;span style="font-style: italic;"&gt;Mythologies&lt;/span&gt;. 1957. Trans.  Annette&lt;br /&gt;Lavers. 1972. Ed. New York: Hill and Wang, 2001. 74-77.&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3634709129539905758-9142847073193602970?l=salt-marsh.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/feeds/9142847073193602970/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=3634709129539905758&amp;postID=9142847073193602970' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/9142847073193602970'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/9142847073193602970'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/2007/09/barthes-citation-and-your-roughs.html' title='Barthes citation and your roughs'/><author><name>Fereshteh</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3634709129539905758.post-3573371970232614003</id><published>2007-09-14T08:36:00.001-04:00</published><updated>2007-09-14T08:58:04.510-04:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='assignments'/><title type='text'>Armory Square on the internet</title><content type='html'>The goal of the first essay assignment is to analyze the contradictions between real places and their representations. The goal is &lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;not&lt;/span&gt; to &lt;span style="font-style: italic;"&gt;&lt;/span&gt; critique Armory Square as a place (&lt;span style="font-style: italic;"&gt;it's sooo quiet&lt;/span&gt;), or to critique the websites for being badly designed or inaccurate (&lt;span style="font-style: italic;"&gt;I couldn't find any useful information&lt;/span&gt;). To do this, you will need to focus on giving us EVIDENCE:&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;When you reference the website, quote directly from their images and their copy (written text). Tell me what you are looking at. Is it a picture of a fresh salmon steak? Describe it. Then explain why you think it is on the website and why it's important to your IDEA. You will use formal citations in MLA style to quote a website.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;When you reference your visits to Armory Square, specify which street you were on, what building you were standing in front of, what time it was, what kind of people were there, the smells in the air, the sounds of the city, if it was raining and people had umbrellas. Take us there!&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Some of you may have discovered that there are other materials about Armory Square on the web and links to other websites. These include:&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.armorysquare.com/"&gt;http://www.armorysquare.com&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;and&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.syracuse.ny.us/armorySquare.asp"&gt;http://www.syracuse.ny.us/armorySquare.asp&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;and websites for individual businesses, such as the Landmark Theater &lt;a href="http://www.landmarktheatre.org/"&gt;LINK&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;You may reference other websites about Armory Square only if you are making a comparison or setting up a contrast. 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title='Armory Square on the internet'/><author><name>Fereshteh</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3634709129539905758.post-803287721253878883</id><published>2007-09-14T08:30:00.000-04:00</published><updated>2007-09-14T08:31:17.398-04:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='video'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='artists'/><title type='text'>video interview with Binh Danh</title><content type='html'>&lt;a href="http://www.kqed.org/arts/people/spark/profile.jsp?id=7660"&gt;http://www.kqed.org/arts/people/spark/profile.jsp?id=7660&lt;/a&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3634709129539905758-803287721253878883?l=salt-marsh.blogspot.com' 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src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3634709129539905758.post-6569558353938607884</id><published>2007-09-12T10:20:00.001-04:00</published><updated>2007-09-12T10:22:02.432-04:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='library'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='links'/><title type='text'>Citation Style Guide</title><content type='html'>You will use the MLA citation style for all essays this semester. &lt;a href="http://library.syr.edu/cite/citationstyle.html"&gt;LINK&lt;/a&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3634709129539905758-6569558353938607884?l=salt-marsh.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/feeds/6569558353938607884/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link 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scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='assignments'/><title type='text'>SyracYOUse assignment outline</title><content type='html'>The assignment outline: &lt;a href="http://fereshteh.net/salty/syracYOUse.pdf"&gt;LINK to PDF&lt;/a&gt;. This important fact was omitted: essay length = 3-4 pages&lt;br /&gt;It will help to read this again for Wednesday as you review "The Blue Guide" essay, and before you go to Armory Square.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Don't forget the GRAMMAR SLAMMER starts this week!&lt;br /&gt;We will have grammar test in-class in about 7 weeks.&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3634709129539905758-5449490810602252839?l=salt-marsh.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/feeds/5449490810602252839/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=3634709129539905758&amp;postID=5449490810602252839' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/5449490810602252839'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/5449490810602252839'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/2007/09/syracyouse-assignment-outline.html' title='SyracYOUse assignment outline'/><author><name>Fereshteh</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3634709129539905758.post-8953272745471567036</id><published>2007-09-09T21:52:00.000-04:00</published><updated>2007-09-10T00:20:54.769-04:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='war'/><title type='text'>234 Weeks (4.5 years) DEAD</title><content type='html'>The New York Times has a photo spread similar to the one appropriated by Binh Danh from the 1969 Life Magazine article. As of 8 September 2007, there were &lt;span style="font-size:180%;"&gt;3,771&lt;/span&gt; Americans dead in the Iraq War, and an estimated &lt;span style="font-size:180%;"&gt;75,000&lt;/span&gt; &lt;span style="font-style: italic;"&gt;civilian &lt;/span&gt;Iraqi deaths.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.iraqbodycount.org/"&gt;LINK to Iraq Body Count&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.nytimes.com/ref/us/20061228_3000FACES_TAB2.html"&gt;LINK to the New York Times data visualization&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.obleek.com/iraq/index.html"&gt;LINK to Iraq War Coalition fatalities&lt;/a&gt; and &lt;a href="http://icasualties.org/oif/"&gt;HERE&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Syracuse is hosting the central New York anti-war rally on Saturday 29 September. &lt;a href="http://www.peacecouncil.net/September29/index.html"&gt;LINK&lt;/a&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3634709129539905758-8953272745471567036?l=salt-marsh.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/feeds/8953272745471567036/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=3634709129539905758&amp;postID=8953272745471567036' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/8953272745471567036'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/8953272745471567036'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/2007/09/234-weeks-45-years-dead.html' title='234 Weeks (4.5 years) DEAD'/><author><name>Fereshteh</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3634709129539905758.post-4900838037599162809</id><published>2007-09-04T10:53:00.001-04:00</published><updated>2007-09-05T10:45:53.512-04:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='announcements'/><title type='text'>Grammar Slammer schedule</title><content type='html'>&lt;a onblur="try {parent.deselectBloggerImageGracefully();} catch(e) {}" href="http://www.toothpastefordinner.com/081005/grammar-police-arrest-this-man.gif"&gt;&lt;img style="margin: 0pt 10px 10px 0pt; float: left; cursor: pointer; width: 400px;" src="http://www.toothpastefordinner.com/081005/grammar-police-arrest-this-man.gif" alt="" border="0" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Details about the Grammar Slammer: &lt;a href="http://fereshteh.net/salty/grammar_slammer.pdf"&gt;LINK HERE&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;6 weeks beginning 10 September&lt;br /&gt;7 pm in Crouse-Hinds 010 on Monday, Tuesday, or Thursday. Required for all Newhouse students and recommended for others. We will have a test in class after the Grammar Slammer is complete.&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3634709129539905758-4900838037599162809?l=salt-marsh.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/feeds/4900838037599162809/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=3634709129539905758&amp;postID=4900838037599162809' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/4900838037599162809'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/4900838037599162809'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/2007/09/grammar-slammer-schedule.html' title='Grammar Slammer schedule'/><author><name>Fereshteh</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3634709129539905758.post-3838321813982536296</id><published>2007-09-02T14:28:00.001-04:00</published><updated>2007-09-02T17:51:33.646-04:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='artists'/><title type='text'>Levine and Duchamp</title><content type='html'>&lt;a onblur="try {parent.deselectBloggerImageGracefully();} catch(e) {}" href="http://www.artnet.com/Magazine/features/cfinch/Images/finch5-7-4s.jpg"&gt;&lt;img style="margin: 0pt 10px 10px 0pt; float: left; cursor: pointer; width: 203px; height: 259px;" src="http://www.artnet.com/Magazine/features/cfinch/Images/finch5-7-4s.jpg" alt="" border="0" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a onblur="try {parent.deselectBloggerImageGracefully();} catch(e) {}" href="http://www.acsu.buffalo.edu/%7Ejconte/Images/Duchamp_Fountain.jpg"&gt;&lt;img style="margin: 0pt 10px 10px 0pt; float: left; cursor: pointer; width: 212px; height: 253px;" src="http://www.acsu.buffalo.edu/%7Ejconte/Images/Duchamp_Fountain.jpg" alt="" border="0" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Sherrie Levine and Marcel Duchamp's &lt;span style="font-style: italic;"&gt;Fountain&lt;/span&gt; pieces. See more about these artists in the links to the right, under "PEOPLE".&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3634709129539905758-3838321813982536296?l=salt-marsh.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/feeds/3838321813982536296/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=3634709129539905758&amp;postID=3838321813982536296' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/3838321813982536296'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/3838321813982536296'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/2007/09/fountain.html' title='Levine and Duchamp'/><author><name>Fereshteh</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3634709129539905758.post-1838955110914112838</id><published>2007-08-29T11:10:00.000-04:00</published><updated>2007-09-12T10:58:42.499-04:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='schedule'/><title type='text'>week 3: Kester</title><content type='html'>GRAMMAR SLAMMER STARTS THIS WEEK&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Make sure you give yourself time to do a site visit to to Armory Square.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;BLOG by &lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;Sun 9 Sept 6 pm&lt;/span&gt;: 2 choices&lt;br /&gt;READ Intro+Chapter 1 from Kester - &lt;span style="font-style: italic;"&gt;Conversation Pieces&lt;/span&gt; p. 1-49&lt;br /&gt;&lt;ul&gt;&lt;li&gt;How does the rhetoric from the Imagining America conference compare to the ideas of community discussed in the Kester article?&lt;br /&gt;OR&lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;Visit the &lt;a href="http://www.lightwork.org/exhibitions/index.html"&gt;Light Work&lt;/a&gt; gallery.  Hours are Sun-Fri 10 am - 6 pm and by appointment. Entry is free. Near Bird Library: 316 Waverly Ave, at the corner of Comstock Ave. ::::::         How does the Binh Danh exhibit function as a testimony about the Viet Nam war and as a reflection of our current times? How does your impression of this exhibit compare to the views from Sontag? Check out her article on the Abu Ghraib prison photos (below) for extra war-related perspectives.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/li&gt;&lt;/ul&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;Mon 10 Sept&lt;/span&gt;:&lt;br /&gt;MEET at Light Work gallery.&lt;br /&gt;in-class discussion and writing about Sontag from last week AND&lt;br /&gt;Kester (1 question+1 observation in your notebook)&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;Wed 12 Sept&lt;/span&gt;:&lt;br /&gt;Come prepared to discuss "The Blue Guide" by Barthes , assigned last week (1 questions+1 observation in your notebook)&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;Fri 14 Sept:&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;BRING a rough thesis for your essay. Use the methods discussed in the handout from class. BRING notes from your field trip to Armory Square. Do the NOTICE + FOCUS process we did together in class on Monday:&lt;br /&gt;1) What do you NOTICE? Make a list.&lt;br /&gt;2) What do you find most INTERESTING? Rank the top choices.&lt;br /&gt;3) WHY does this observation matter?&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3634709129539905758-1838955110914112838?l=salt-marsh.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/feeds/1838955110914112838/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=3634709129539905758&amp;postID=1838955110914112838' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/1838955110914112838'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/1838955110914112838'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/2007/08/week-three-schedule.html' title='week 3: Kester'/><author><name>Fereshteh</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3634709129539905758.post-4534057956030136642</id><published>2007-08-27T14:22:00.000-04:00</published><updated>2007-09-01T19:11:23.154-04:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='schedule'/><title type='text'>week 2: de Duve, Sontag, Barthes (Blue Guide)</title><content type='html'>The printed schedule from the syllabus has already changed so please make sure to consult the blog from now on!&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;BLOG due &lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;Mon 3 Sept by 6pm&lt;/span&gt; (this is a special extension just for this week)&lt;br /&gt;No class because it's Labor Day, but you still have reading due!&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;1- READ the &lt;a href="http://fereshteh.net/salty/deduve.pdf"&gt;excerpt from “Art was a proper name” from &lt;span style="font-style: italic;"&gt;Kant after Duchamp&lt;/span&gt; by Thierry de Duve, 1996&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;2- WRITE 2 paragraphs in response to the reading. Post the text to your blog so that I can see that it’s up and running:&lt;br /&gt;&lt;ul&gt;&lt;li&gt;Define ART in one sentence. Then discuss a memorable experience you have had with an ART work. Where did you find the piece, and when? How much time did you spend with it? Why was it memorable? How would you describe it to someone who wasn't there? What distinguished it from other art works you have experienced? What kind of emotions did it evoke? What was the artist's intention for the work? Was it successful or not, and why?&lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;Discuss de Duve’s essay in relation to your own thoughts about art. &lt;/li&gt;&lt;/ul&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;Wed 5 Sept:&lt;/span&gt; READ &lt;a href="http://fereshteh.net/salty/sontag_imageworld.pdf"&gt;"The Image-World" from &lt;span style="font-style: italic;"&gt;On Photography&lt;/span&gt; by Susan Sontag, 1977&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;OPTIONAL READING: &lt;a href="http://southerncrossreview.org/35/sontag.htm"&gt;"Regarding the torture of others" by Susan Sontag, 2004&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;We'll have an in-class discussion about de Duve &lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;and&lt;/span&gt; Sontag.  Come prepared with 1 question and 1 comment for each author.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;RECOMMENDED EVENT  (take notes, this will give you good material for upcoming  assignments)&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;Thu 6 Sept 6:30 pm :&lt;/span&gt; Binh Danh, Vietnamese photographer, Watson Auditorium&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;Fri 7 Sept:&lt;/span&gt;  READ &lt;a href="http://fereshteh.net/salty/barthes_blueguide.pdf"&gt;“The Blue Guide” by Roland Barthes from &lt;span style="font-style: italic;"&gt;Mythologies, 1957&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;No class today because of the conference, but you still need to do the reading. This reading is the basis for your first essay assignment.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="font-style: italic;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;In lieu of class:&lt;br /&gt;* VISIT &lt;a href="http://www.lightwork.org/exhibitions/index.html"&gt;the Binh Danh exhibit at Light Work&lt;/a&gt;.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;and/or&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;* ATTEND one of the panel discussions at the &lt;a href="http://imaginingamerica.syr.edu/07.ia-nc.html"&gt;Imagining America Conference&lt;/a&gt; that I’ve listed below. Conference attendance for students costs $35 (regular fees are over $100 for the 3-day event), and this provides free food and entry to all the events.  If you choose to attend and this is a burden for you, please contact me or Assistant Provost Bobbi Jones at rsjones@syr.edu&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.lightwork.org/exhibitions/index.html"&gt;Light Work&lt;/a&gt; gallery hours are Sun-Fri 10 am - 6 pm and by appointment. Entry is free.&lt;br /&gt;Next to the Bird Library: 316 Waverly Ave, at the corner of Comstock Ave.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;7-8 September : IMAGINING AMERICA CONFERENCE OPTIONS&lt;br /&gt;See full conference schedule here: &lt;a href="http://imaginingamerica.syr.edu/07.ia-nc.html"&gt;http://imaginingamerica.syr.edu/07.ia-nc.html &lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style=";font-family:arial;font-size:85%;"  &gt;FRI 9:45 – 11:15  Community Voices: Do We Really Hear Them? Are We Really Listening? Sheraton Syracuse University Hotel and Conference Center – ADAMS ROOM&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;FRI 1:15-2:45 Over-the-Rhine: A Model for Student Immersion, Learning, and Social Change - Sheraton Syracuse University Hotel and Conference Center – COMSTOCK A&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;FRI 3-4:30  Moving Art Into the Public: A Seminar and a Dialogue - Sheraton Syracuse University Hotel and Conference Center – COMSTOCK B&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;SAT 2:15-345 Negotiating Contradictory Values in Community Arts/Higher Education Partnerships - Sheraton Syracuse University Hotel and Conference Center – COMSTOCK B&lt;/span&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3634709129539905758-4534057956030136642?l=salt-marsh.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/feeds/4534057956030136642/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=3634709129539905758&amp;postID=4534057956030136642' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/4534057956030136642'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/4534057956030136642'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/2007/08/week-two-schedule.html' title='week 2: de Duve, Sontag, Barthes (Blue Guide)'/><author><name>Fereshteh</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3634709129539905758.post-7694376201921212128</id><published>2007-08-27T13:48:00.000-04:00</published><updated>2007-08-29T16:27:41.238-04:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='schedule'/><title type='text'>week 1: intros, Swanson/Adler, Barthes (Criticism)</title><content type='html'>&lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;Mon 27 Aug:&lt;/span&gt; introductions, blackboard, blog, portraits, student info, books, notebooks&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;Wed 29 Aug:  &lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;1-SET UP your blog http://www.blogger.com&lt;br /&gt;and make sure you can access Blackboard.&lt;br /&gt;2-EMAIL FHT with your blog URL&lt;br /&gt;3-READ and take NOTES:&lt;br /&gt;-“What’s wrong with plagiarism?” by Gunnar Swanson&lt;br /&gt;-the syllabus&lt;br /&gt;-chapters 3 and 12 from &lt;span style="font-style: italic;"&gt;How to Read a Book&lt;/span&gt; by Charles Adler&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Don’t forget to bring your printed readings to class. They should be marked up with notes and underlined or highlighted. Be prepared for a quiz.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;Fri 31 Aug:&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;1-READ and take NOTES:&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a href="http://fereshteh.net/salty/barthes_criticism.pdf"&gt;“Blind and Dumb Criticism” by Roland Barthes from &lt;span style="font-style: italic;"&gt;Mythologies&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/a&gt;.  Right-click or control-click on the link to download to the computer. &lt;span style="color: rgb(255, 0, 0); font-weight: bold;"&gt;Read it three times.&lt;/span&gt; Make notes in your notebook. Come prepared with 1 question and 1 comment about Barthes for the class. We will have a discussion.&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3634709129539905758-7694376201921212128?l=salt-marsh.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/feeds/7694376201921212128/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=3634709129539905758&amp;postID=7694376201921212128' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/7694376201921212128'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/7694376201921212128'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/2007/08/week-one-schedule.html' title='week 1: intros, Swanson/Adler, Barthes (Criticism)'/><author><name>Fereshteh</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3634709129539905758.post-1190942555464887528</id><published>2007-08-27T13:21:00.000-04:00</published><updated>2007-08-27T13:53:46.001-04:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='announcements'/><title type='text'>Did you email me your blog URL?</title><content type='html'>It was great to meet you all today and I look forward to seeing you on WED&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Don't forget to send me an e-mail with the website of YOUR blog. Sign up at http://www.blogger.com&lt;br /&gt;For next class, you don't need to post anything, just set up an account. You will need to have a Google/Gmail account to do this. Email me if you have questions.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Make your blog address something relevant like:&lt;br /&gt;http://wordsofwisdomfromcasey.blogspot.com(example)&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;-------- WHAT ELSE FOR NEXT TIME? --------&lt;br /&gt;DOWNLOAD the articles from the Blackboard site, PRINT them, READ them with lots of notes, and bring them to class.&lt;br /&gt;READ THE SYLLABUS CAREFULLY! We will have a quiz.&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3634709129539905758-1190942555464887528?l=salt-marsh.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/feeds/1190942555464887528/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=3634709129539905758&amp;postID=1190942555464887528' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/1190942555464887528'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/1190942555464887528'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/2007/08/it-was-great-to-meet-you-all-today-and.html' title='Did you email me your blog URL?'/><author><name>Fereshteh</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3634709129539905758.post-3356072971286830694</id><published>2007-08-26T19:15:00.000-04:00</published><updated>2007-08-26T19:17:20.427-04:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='books'/><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='reading'/><title type='text'>buying books</title><content type='html'>You are welcome to purchase books on-line or anywhere else. If you choose to do this, I encourage you to place the order right away, at the latest  by the end of business (5 pm) on Monday. You MUST choose a delivery option that ensures that your books arrive by Wednesday September 5th.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I will not make allowances for anyone who does not have their books on&lt;br /&gt; time, as you will still be responsible for any assigned readings.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Also keep in mind that sometimes shipping costs make it so that a used&lt;br /&gt; book delivered by mail is not always the bargain it appears to be at&lt;br /&gt; first glance.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Here is the list of titles:&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-style:italic;"&gt;Conversation Pieces: Community and Communication in Modern Art&lt;/span&gt;  by&lt;br /&gt; Grant H. Kester  &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-style:italic;"&gt;Participation&lt;/span&gt; edited by Claire Bishop &lt;br /&gt;&lt;span style="font-style:italic;"&gt;&lt;br /&gt;One Place after Another: Site-Specific Art and Locational Identity&lt;/span&gt; by&lt;br /&gt; Miwon Kwon&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/3634709129539905758-3356072971286830694?l=salt-marsh.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/feeds/3356072971286830694/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=3634709129539905758&amp;postID=3356072971286830694' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/3356072971286830694'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3634709129539905758/posts/default/3356072971286830694'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://salt-marsh.blogspot.com/2007/08/buying-books.html' title='buying books'/><author><name>Fereshteh</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3634709129539905758.post-3031581049887539947</id><published>2007-08-26T19:07:00.000-04:00</published><updated>2007-08-26T19:13:27.125-04:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='announcements'/><title type='text'>Greetings from CAS 100!</title><content type='html'>HELLO&lt;br /&gt;My name is Fereshteh and I'll be your instructor for CAS 100, the first&lt;br /&gt; year writing seminar. The title of the class is "Salt Stories", which&lt;br /&gt; refers to the old salt industry that once made Syracuse famous. It's a&lt;br /&gt; class about contemporary site-specific and public art practices. If&lt;br /&gt; that means nothing to you, that's ok! We're going to be talking about this&lt;br /&gt; for the next few months so by the end of the year you will know a lot&lt;br /&gt; more. Along the way we will read and write about critical theory,&lt;br /&gt; philosophy, news articles, maps, and a whole assortment of other media. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;BOOKS&lt;br /&gt;In addition to writing and getting out to experience the city and art&lt;br /&gt; projects, you will have reading to do. I know that the books haven't&lt;br /&gt; arrived at the bookstore, but it's no problem because we will be reading&lt;br /&gt; articles at first. I'm sure you are all quite busy with settling in to&lt;br /&gt; your new home, but meanwhile please check out the Blackboard site for&lt;br /&gt; our course. There, under READING, I've posted the first articles we will&lt;br /&gt; be reading for class. They are PDFs that you can download and print&lt;br /&gt; out. You don't have to read them yet, but please make sure you can access&lt;br /&gt; Blackboard by the first day of class.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;http://blackboard.syr.edu/&lt;br /&gt;USE YOUR REGULAR NETID AND PASSWORD TO SIGN IN&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;For the first week we will use Blackboard, but once everyone has their blogger account set up we will usually use Blogger for course updates and assignments.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;FIRST DAY&lt;br /&gt;What should you bring to class on the first day? Please bring a&lt;br /&gt; notebook (bound, spiral, binder, it's up to you), a writing utensil, and an&lt;br /&gt; open mind.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I'm looking forward to meeting you all soon! 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